Essay topics: You went to the local hospital’s Emergency Department with your young child who had severe stomach pains. You had to wait for almost four hours before your daughter was treated by a doctor and, while you were waiting, you were constantly ignored by the other staff.
Write a letter to the Register , complaining about the service you received.
I am resident of Chandigarh and live in sector 10 near DAV College. The purpose of mine to penning down this epistle is to complaining about the staff service of local hospital
Yesterday, my younger child was get up in morning 8 AM and he crying in severe stomach pain, then I was given medicine for controlling the pain, but my all efforts are gone to vain. Show my wife was saying, for going to hospital immediately. Then I call to Ambulance emergency and we go to PGI hospital immediately fill the form of emergency treatment. But the doctor was not present at that time and stuff so the doctor had come 1 PM, four hours late and I was wait for daughter and my child was crying, due to chronic pain in stomach. But the staff do not give treatment to patients even they gave show my wife was saying, for going to hospital immediately. Then I call to Ambulance emergency and we go to PGI hospital immediately fill the form of emergency treatment. But the doctor was not present at that time and stuff so the doctor had come 1 PM, four hours late and I was wait for daughter and my child was crying, due to chronic pain in stomach. But the staff do not give treatment to patient ,even they what are constantly ignored by staff. I face many problems in the hospital. I would be very grateful if you solve this problem so nobody can face this problem again.
Yours sincerely 22nd February 2018
Aman
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...o complaining about the staff service of local hospital Yesterday, my younger ...
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Suggestion: ,
...e staff do not give treatment to patient ,even they what are constantly ignored by...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... are constantly ignored by staff. I face many problems in the hospital. I would b...
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Line 5, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e this problem again. Yours sincerely 22nd February 2018 Aman
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.48453608247 187% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 5.05154639175 297% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1148.0 937.175257732 122% => OK
No of words: 260.0 206.0 126% => OK
Chars per words: 4.41538461538 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 3.78020617076 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46245175365 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 127.690721649 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.480769230769 0.622605031667 77% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 350.1 290.88556701 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 5.0 0.463917525773 1078% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 68.930319083 44.8134815571 154% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.6666666667 76.5299724578 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6666666667 16.8248392259 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.41666666667 4.34317383033 33% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 7.41237113402 13% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 1.49484536082 535% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222401420955 0.216113520407 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0736388287881 0.0766984524023 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.064454632778 0.0603063233224 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101797369994 0.12726935374 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0783569414003 0.0580467560999 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 8.37731958763 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 75.54 70.7449484536 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.36 8.71597938144 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.74 7.59969072165 89% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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