Essay topics:
Your internet connection has been a slow and intermittent.
Write a letter to your internet service provider to complain. In the letter:
- describe the problem and why you are unhappy
- for an engineer to visit your home
- request a reduction in your bill
Dear sir or madam,
I have been a satisfied customer of yours for over a year, but recently my connection has become intermittent. Even when it is working, it is too slow that it is unusable.
I have actually informed your customer service department of this by phone on two separate occasions, and the problem has now been ongoing for around ten weeks. I would like to request that an engineer be sent to my property since all attempts to resolve the issue remotely have failed. If you could contact me at this email address to arrange a suitable time, that would be great.
Furthermore, since I have not received the advertised service for two-and-a-half months, I do not believe I should be charged for this period. The amount equates to £98; I will accept either a payment or a reduction in the total of future bills.
I hope we can resolve this situation promptly.
Regards,
Robert Smith
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, furthermore, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 743.0 937.175257732 79% => OK
No of words: 158.0 206.0 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.70253164557 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.54539209256 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6990016373 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 127.690721649 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.696202531646 0.622605031667 112% => OK
syllable_count: 233.1 290.88556701 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.0933353493 44.8134815571 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.5555555556 76.5299724578 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5555555556 16.8248392259 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.77777777778 4.34317383033 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171170470599 0.216113520407 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0560778661264 0.0766984524023 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0580091255826 0.0603063233224 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0909465192765 0.12726935374 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0660947148781 0.0580467560999 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 8.37731958763 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.68 8.71597938144 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.