Your internet connection has been a slow and intermittent Write a letter to your internet service provider to complain In the letter describe the problem and why you are unhappy for an engineer to visit your home request a reduction in your bill

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Your internet connection has been a slow and intermittent.
Write a letter to your internet service provider to complain. In the letter:
- describe the problem and why you are unhappy
- for an engineer to visit your home
- request a reduction in your bill

Dear sir or madam,

I am writing this to express my dissatisfaction with your Internet service. I have been using your service for almost two years. However, in the past two months I have been experiencing too slow and intermittent connection, which is very disappointing. Although the recent bills have been paid fully and promptly, this phenomenon is unfair. I, furthermore, am a researcher, which means having access to the internet connection is a must for me and without it I am unable to proceed my project.

To resolve the problem, I would appreciate it if you could send a technical engineer to look into it. In order to arrange that, please contact me at your earliest convenience. Here is my phone number: 02177854121.

In addition to this, I would like to ask you a full refund for the past 2 months due to the fact that it was not connected, or make a reduction in my future bill.

I look forward to hearing from you,

Yours faithfully,
Saeed Mortazavi

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, look, so, in addition

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 807.0 937.175257732 86% => OK
No of words: 169.0 206.0 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77514792899 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60555127546 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95998783067 2.54303337028 116% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.662721893491 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 235.8 290.88556701 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.5628059145 44.8134815571 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.7 76.5299724578 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9 16.8248392259 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.7 4.34317383033 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.282000586457 0.216113520407 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101156468821 0.0766984524023 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0665593413467 0.0603063233224 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115568601398 0.12726935374 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0750160458252 0.0580467560999 129% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 8.37731958763 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 8.71597938144 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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