The following maps show some of the changes that have taken place in Dubai in recent decades.
The pair of maps indicate how Dubai has been changed in recent decades.
Overall, a comparison of two maps shown that the area underwent significant development over the period shown, specifically respect to the building infrastructure.
Looking at the first map in more detail, it can be seen that the clock tower roundabout was surrounded by crossroad. There were a few buildings at the side of the road, which was mainly covered in sand and trees.
The second map show that many skyscrapers are constructed at the side of the road. The road is heavily used due to transport infrastructure such as the increase in the number of people driving car and the amount of traffic. In addition, trees are planted around the edge of the clock tower roundabout instead of at the side road in the past.
- Many students choose to take a gap year before starting university, to travel or gain work experience. Do you think this is a good idea or a waste of time 61
- Air travel produces 3 5 of the carbon dioxide released into the atmosphere and is predicted to become the world s largest cause of environmental damage and global warming Governments around the world plan to increase the cost of flying to encourage people 48
- The bar chart shows the percentage of adults who were overweight or obese too fat or much too fat in one country from 1965 to 2015 The pie chart shows the proportion of adults who were overweight obese or severely obese in2015 Summarise the information by 77
- Children are now less active in their free time than in the past Therefore sports lessons must be compulsory in schools To what extent do you agree or disagree Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or exper 64
- The diagram illustrates the process of lithography a method used for printing newspapers 77
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, look, second, so, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 32.9175257732 12% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 674.0 937.175257732 72% => OK
No of words: 138.0 206.0 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88405797101 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.42743929552 3.78020617076 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78333512559 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 90.0 127.690721649 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.652173913043 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 199.8 290.88556701 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 9.13402061856 11% => OK
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.9904746783 44.8134815571 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.2857142857 76.5299724578 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7142857143 16.8248392259 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 4.34317383033 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 7.41237113402 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.140075945762 0.216113520407 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0757822523273 0.0766984524023 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.113792437221 0.0603063233224 189% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11309955461 0.12726935374 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.130661837237 0.0580467560999 225% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 8.37731958763 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 8.71597938144 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 7.59969072165 110% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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