Dear Soo.
I'am Hyomin. I hope this letter finds you well. As I remember right, you will come to my country the first monday of next month. But something goes wrong with the plan that you want to stay with me.
To tell the truth, I can not be with you at that time, there is an important meeting with my customer at the company. So the business trip may last for a week.
It was my fault that I misunderstood the meeting date with the client, in the event your visiting plan will not work this time. I really sorry for my absence and the mistake I made.
So, I suggest you one idea that make your feel recover. When the day of your last trip, I will go your country with you. I need your flight number to book the same airplane to be with you.
Once again, I am really sorry and please appologize me. I look forward hearing from you soon.
Best regards,
LEE Hyomin.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, look, may, really, so, well, to tell the truth
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 710.0 937.175257732 76% => OK
No of words: 169.0 206.0 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.20118343195 4.54256449028 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60555127546 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.02767864576 2.54303337028 80% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 127.690721649 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.627218934911 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 207.0 290.88556701 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.41237113402 85% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.5631011354 44.8134815571 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 54.6153846154 76.5299724578 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.0 16.8248392259 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.46153846154 4.34317383033 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.326093090328 0.216113520407 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0946627680091 0.0766984524023 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0710770316842 0.0603063233224 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167847823807 0.12726935374 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0711375167847 0.0580467560999 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 4.9 8.37731958763 58% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 92.12 70.7449484536 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 3.6 7.45979381443 48% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 6.19 8.71597938144 71% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 5.4 7.59969072165 71% => OK
difficult_words: 12.0 41.2886597938 29% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 5.0 8.15463917526 61% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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