A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter
• give contact details for when you are away
• give instructions about how to care for your pet
• describe other household duties
Dear Kate,
Thank you again for agreeing to look after Bella while I'll be in Kuala Lumpur for the next two weeks. You can reach me by calling Parkroyal hotel directly on +60301235678 and ask to connect to room 1234 since I won't be using my mobile there.
Please give Bella 130 grams only of dry cat food daily, which is stored in the small room next to the kitchen. You may use the measuring cup inside the bag of cat food to put the food on the red bowl next to the fridge. Also, every other day please open up a can food, put it on a carton plate and leave it next to the bowl. The cans and carton plates are on the upper cupboard next to the microwave oven. Final request is to check if her water dispenser is empty and fill it up accordingly. I usually fill it up every four to five days.
In addition, for security reasons please check my mailbox and collect the mails and bills. I don't expect any package to be delivered in the coming days.
Your friend,
Balzhan
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 56, Rule ID: ILL_I_LL[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I'll'?
Suggestion: I'll
... for agreeing to look after Bella while Ill be in Kuala Lumpur for the next two wee...
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Line 7, column 94, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...lbox and collect the mails and bills. I dont expect any package to be delivered in t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, if, look, may, so, while, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 32.9175257732 46% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 795.0 937.175257732 85% => OK
No of words: 188.0 206.0 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.22872340426 4.54256449028 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70287850203 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.05984343021 2.54303337028 81% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.627659574468 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 240.3 290.88556701 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.4806363167 44.8134815571 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.2727272727 76.5299724578 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0909090909 16.8248392259 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.09090909091 4.34317383033 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.135825699224 0.216113520407 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0574924921771 0.0766984524023 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0911103544721 0.0603063233224 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0665758564665 0.12726935374 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0497610749195 0.0580467560999 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.0 8.37731958763 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 70.7449484536 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.96 8.71597938144 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.83 7.59969072165 90% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 41.2886597938 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.