A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter
• give contact details for where you are away
• give instructions about how to care for your pet
• describe other household duties
Dear Rib,
hope you are doing fine, first of all, I would like to thank you for taking care of my house and pet while I am away on a short holiday.
I would like to tell you in case of an emergency, I am reachable on 456789 and for my pet you would need to follow certain instructions like you would need to take him on short walks early in the morning and in the evening apart from this you will need to feed him dog food and water thrice a day , you just need to pour water and food in his utensils kept under the patio sofa, in case he does not eat dog food there is some chicken kept in the freezer, please boil it and give it to him.
Furthermore, you need to keep a check on the maid if she is mopping the floor properly, in case of the rain please close the windows as the rainwater comes inside the rooms and spoils the wooden flooring.
I hope you enjoy this stay and thanks again for being of such great help in this hour of need.
warm wishes
vinshu
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Rib, hope you are doing fine, first of all, I...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 297, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...feed him dog food and water thrice a day , you just need to pour water and food in...
^^
Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Warm
...uch great help in this hour of need. warm wishes vinshu
^^^^
Line 11, column 12, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...elp in this hour of need. warm wishes vinshu
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, so, while, apart from, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 4.92783505155 223% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 783.0 937.175257732 84% => OK
No of words: 194.0 206.0 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.03608247423 4.54256449028 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 1.92040155783 2.54303337028 76% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.582474226804 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 233.1 290.88556701 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.41237113402 85% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 12.6804123711 39% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 38.0 16.3608247423 232% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 160.81243733 44.8134815571 359% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 156.6 76.5299724578 205% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 38.8 16.8248392259 231% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 11.8 4.34317383033 272% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164775516168 0.216113520407 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0838435555868 0.0766984524023 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0732630538439 0.0603063233224 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107700175557 0.12726935374 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0717071485367 0.0580467560999 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 8.37731958763 203% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.75 70.7449484536 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 7.45979381443 180% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.74 8.71597938144 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.9 7.59969072165 91% => OK
difficult_words: 17.0 41.2886597938 41% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 26.0 8.62886597938 301% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 17.2 8.54432989691 201% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.