A friend has offered you some work in his company. You are currently employed and not able to start for 3 months.
Write a reply to your friend. In your letter:
- give details of what you know about his company.
- explain your current situation
- give your answer to the offer and explain why
Dear Baljeet,
I am writing to express my thanks for considering me for the data analyst profile in your company 'The thinking Tree'. I am proud to see the exponential rise that you have achieved in your startup and the kind of team you have built as was apparent from your company’s website. I would also like to congratulate you on the success of your recent round of funding and on the growing interest of investors in your organization.
Unfortunately, I would not be able to accept your offer due to my current professional commitments. My current organization had fully funded my MSc data science program last year and I had to sign the bond for uninterrupted service for the next two years. Therefore, I am bounded by the agreement which is non-negotiable in most terms. Moreover, I am currently heading a very sensitive project and might be offered a long term on-site opportunity.
I sincerely apologize for my inability to accept this offer but would like to be part of your team in the near future when I complete my committed period.
Hope you understand my concern. I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Best Regards,
Bhawna Sharma
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
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| 2020-08-31 | manshu_d | 82 | view |
| 2019-08-16 | Bhawna Sharma | 76 | view |
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Comments
Hi Shawn, How are you doing?…
Hi Shawn,
How are you doing? I am thankful to you for the job offer in your company XYZ limited as ‘Senior Technical Specialists’. But due to some legal obligations, I’ll not be able to join for the three months.
XYZ limited is reputed company in Information and Technology world with billion dollars revenue club. I got very good feedback from lot of my friends about the company. It has employee friendly policies as well as offers good compensation along with flexibility in working hours. It has presence across the globe and in all the major cities in India which gives an opportunity to choose the location of our convinence.
In my current organisation, I’m working on multiple projects which are very critical in terms of business as clients I’m working with is having 15 years of long relationship with company. We need to inform customer’s manager three months prior to any change in roles and responsibilities as well as I’m legally abided to serve the three months of compulsary notice period with my current company.
I’m gracefully accepting the offer made as I don’t want to miss golden opportunity to be the part of such a fantastic organisation which will give me good work-life balance. But, I’ll join after three months upon completion of mandatory notice period.
I look forward to see you in your office soon.
Keep in touch
Ajay
Please provide feedback and…
Please provide feedback and band score. Thanks
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 282, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...arent from your company's website. I would also like to congratulate you on ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, look, moreover, so, therefore, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 972.0 937.175257732 104% => OK
No of words: 200.0 206.0 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76060309309 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97529830437 2.54303337028 117% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 127.690721649 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 302.4 290.88556701 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.5838883456 44.8134815571 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.3636363636 76.5299724578 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1818181818 16.8248392259 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.45454545455 4.34317383033 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.256911944947 0.216113520407 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.095941564717 0.0766984524023 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0690359882399 0.0603063233224 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150635293397 0.12726935374 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.06930740623 0.0580467560999 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 8.37731958763 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.61 8.71597938144 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 7.59969072165 115% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 41.2886597938 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 8.62886597938 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.