Many parents encourage young people to leave home when they become older, while others think they should stay at home with the family. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Across the world, there are parents who wish to see their child as independent and hence encourage them to leave the home while others feel that family should always live together. I believe that the family should stay together, and this essay will discuss both the views.
To begin with, parents always want the best for their children. In this process, while some want to keep their offspring under their wings, the others want their child to leave the nest early and follow their own trajectory. Some progenitors wish their offspring to become independent and start from scratch; this, they think, makes the child more responsible and to values things he has earned in life. Meanwhile, parents who have always shared the burden of responsibilities get to enjoy the golden age with their own privacy. So, as the youngster faces the initial struggles, he becomes confident and develops his own understanding of the world, fulfilling the objective to be sent to live independently.
However, there are old people who want to stay connected and stay together with the family. Old age has its own demands, as parents become weak with time, they need the warmth of young hands. Moreover, staying alone brings a feeling of isolation and push an individual towards depression. To make matters worse, there have been many cases when old people living alone have been smothered or looted. Many old folks believe that having daily supper with the family, keeps the family closely knitted. For instance, in India, most of the families are joint families where the young and the old all stay together. This not only helps the children and grandchildren to live under the care and love of the parents and grandparents but also brings peace to the old who see their family growing.
To conclude, while staying away from parents helps an individual to make an independent living, growing old with parents brings peace and emotional support, and helps to develop family values. So, in India, we have three generations of a family living together, where youngsters get to learn family values and elders feel happy to be surrounded by young.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, moreover, so, while, for instance, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1778.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 357.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98039215686 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34677393335 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47564540181 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.512605042017 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 531.9 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.7165794702 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.125 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3125 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.9375 7.06120827912 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.242454057237 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0826355373759 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0519254348074 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145890886517 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0512238245277 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.9 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.65 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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