Dear Michael
I hope you are doing well. I have received your email about the job offer in your giant company and I am super thrilled that you find me a qualified person for the position. However, I am afraid to say that it is not possible for me to join with you sooner than 3 months.
Having an opportunity to work in your reputable company is a dream for all software developers as I heard you are expanding your business to other countries and bringing a couple of innovative ideas to boost your market share in a fast pace.
Since I have been working for 10 years in a tech company which provides banking solution for private sector, it is difficult to delegate my enormous tasks to other staff in a short period of time and the process should be done precisely to prevent any business risks.
As I am eager to be a member in your team, I ask you to give me another chance to have a job interview with your human resource department in next 3 months to present my experience and skills.
I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Best regards,
David
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 242, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...boost your market share in a fast pace. Since I have been working for 10 years i...
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Line 4, column 182, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...normous tasks to other staff in a short period of time and the process should be done precisel...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, so, well, as to, i am afraid
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 868.0 937.175257732 93% => OK
No of words: 198.0 206.0 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.38383838384 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75116612262 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45136344438 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.621212121212 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 275.4 290.88556701 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 16.3608247423 147% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 89.7203990183 44.8134815571 200% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 108.5 76.5299724578 142% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.75 16.8248392259 147% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.875 4.34317383033 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.326790021532 0.216113520407 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12994388983 0.0766984524023 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0958293659209 0.0603063233224 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172547789169 0.12726935374 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0868736954292 0.0580467560999 150% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 8.37731958763 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.42 8.71597938144 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 8.54432989691 136% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.