A friend has written to you asking for advice about a problem at work. You have had a similar problem in the past.
Write a reply to your friend,in your letter
Tell your friend you understand the problem.
Explain what happened to you in the past.
Suggest possible solutions to the problem.
Tell them how much you are looking forward to the holiday
Explain why you must change your plans.
Suggest alternative arrangements.
Dear Jonathan
It’s been so long since we last were in touch and I have not forgotten all the wonderful times we spend together last year.
I completely understand that you have difficulties in communicating with your colleagues at workplace since you have just enter the new company. It is always challenging to introduce yourself to stranger at work place, especially when you are a non-native English speaker. However, you have to conquer the fear of talking to them, other wise you can not work together.
I still remember that when I fist came to my company, I can not look at my colleague’s eye while I was talking to them. I think it was because I have low confidence in myself by that time .Consequently, my co-worker thought I have a very shy personality at that moment.It took me many times and efforts to communicate with them effectively.
In order to tackle this problem, I suggest you attend some social activities with your colleagues after work, such as dinner or sports. This way you can make more friends at work. Meanwhile, you can keep working on your English-speaking skill. It could help you gain more confidence in yourself.
It will be great to catch up again soon.
All the best
Bill
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 171, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'introducing'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'challenge' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: introducing
...e new company. It is always challenging to introduce yourself to stranger at work place, esp...
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Line 9, column 332, Rule ID: OTHER_WISE_OTHERWISE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'otherwise'?
Suggestion: otherwise
...to conquer the fear of talking to them, other wise you can not work together. I still...
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Line 13, column 193, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ve low confidence in myself by that time .Consequently, my co-worker thought I hav...
^^
Line 13, column 195, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Consequently
... low confidence in myself by that time .Consequently, my co-worker thought I have a very shy...
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Line 13, column 275, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: It
...e a very shy personality at that moment.It took me many times and efforts to commu...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, however, if, look, so, still, while, i think, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 32.9175257732 140% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1040.0 937.175257732 111% => OK
No of words: 212.0 206.0 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90566037736 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81578560438 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93368545075 2.54303337028 115% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 127.690721649 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.655660377358 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 310.5 290.88556701 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.13402061856 153% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.1196019428 44.8134815571 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.6666666667 76.5299724578 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6666666667 16.8248392259 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.58333333333 4.34317383033 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.307445435583 0.216113520407 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114529123095 0.0766984524023 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0966953812932 0.0603063233224 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136958761681 0.12726935374 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.150424819047 0.0580467560999 259% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 8.37731958763 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.9 8.71597938144 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.24 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.