A friend who lives in another country has invited you to come and stay with him/her on your next holiday. You are too busy to accept the invitation. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter:
Thank him/her for the invitation.
Explain why you cannot come
Ask him about other times to visit.
You need to write at least 150 words.
Dear......,
I have received your invitation mail last week asking to join you in this winter vacasion. I am extremely sorry to inform you that I will not be able to reach there due to some official needs.
My final project presentation has been scheduled during the winter season and I cannot miss it, as I am the key person. It really requires a thorough preparation and hard work. I have to be more careful this time because my performance in the last two quarters were not upto the expected level. Had you invited me during summer, I would have come and enjoyed with you. By the way, what is your plans for next summer? I would be probably free then.
It has been quite a long time since we met for holidays. Here,my family and me always reiterate those sweet leidure memories and we really desire to spend another one like that soon. Kindly send me a few options of time and location, so that we can plan a meet up very soon.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely,
Name.
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- A friend who lives in another country has invited you to come and stay with him her on your next holiday You are too busy to accept the invitation Write a letter to your friend In your letter Thank him her for the invitation Explain why you cannot come As 56
- A friend who lives in another country has invited you to come and stay with him her on your next holiday You are too busy to accept the invitation Write a letter to your friend In your letter Thank him her for the invitation Explain why you cannot come As 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 57, Rule ID: THE_FALL_SEASON[1]
Message: Use simply 'winter'.
Suggestion: winter
... presentation has been scheduled during the winter season and I cannot miss it, as I am the key p...
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Line 6, column 62, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , my
...ong time since we met for holidays. Here,my family and me always reiterate those sw...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
look, really, so, then, by the way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 823.0 937.175257732 88% => OK
No of words: 184.0 206.0 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.47282608696 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68302321012 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34358892011 2.54303337028 92% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.690217391304 0.622605031667 111% => OK
syllable_count: 256.5 290.88556701 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.8126005889 44.8134815571 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 63.3076923077 76.5299724578 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.1538461538 16.8248392259 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.61538461538 4.34317383033 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200680403804 0.216113520407 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0696814483427 0.0766984524023 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.080404316184 0.0603063233224 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110155671958 0.12726935374 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.061243785289 0.0580467560999 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.7 8.37731958763 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.05 8.71597938144 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.25 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.