Dear Amber,
I hope you are doing well with your family and thank you for your invitation to stay with you next holiday, I am sorry that I am fully occupied on my next holiday.
Our team leader resigned from our company two weeks ago, so I am taking over her projects. Therefore, the holidays are full of arrangements while not only will have two meetings in different countries, also need to attend an AI development conference in Japan at the end of the coming holiday. To be honest, I have a feeling that I will be physically and mentally exhausted due to the need to fly 4 times a week.
I have the good news for you which is I found the limited-edition handbag you’ve been looking for. The shop that sells handbags is near the AI conference venue which can help you buy them. In addition, I also got a nice tea from my home country and planned to give it to uncle.
Hope to see you soon.
Warm wishes,
Chris Wong
- Individuals can do nothing to improve the environment only governments and large companies can make a difference To what extent do you agree or disagree 73
- The pie chart shows the amount of money that a children s charity located in the USA spend and recieved in on year 67
- Many elderly people are no longer looked after by their families but are put in care homes or nursing homes What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend 61
- A friend you met last year has invited you to visit them in their country You have never been there before and need some information before you leave Write letter to your friend In your letter1 request advice about a gift for his her family2 ask about 73
- You find that your study load is too heavy Write a letter to your college teacher explaining why you need to withdraw from two courses Ask if it is possible to obtain a refund 64
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, so, therefore, well, while, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 765.0 937.175257732 82% => OK
No of words: 174.0 206.0 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.39655172414 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63192868298 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49523922443 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 127.690721649 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.66091954023 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 235.8 290.88556701 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.9433333225 44.8134815571 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.0 76.5299724578 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3333333333 16.8248392259 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.11111111111 4.34317383033 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.268322238758 0.216113520407 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.085419862461 0.0766984524023 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.109340742184 0.0603063233224 181% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163626928444 0.12726935374 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.129439185047 0.0580467560999 223% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 8.37731958763 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.24 8.71597938144 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.3 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 41.2886597938 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.