A friend you made while you were studying abroad has written to ask for your help in finding a job in your country you have heard about a job in local company that might be suitable for him her tell you friend about a job and what sort of work it involves

Dear Mark,
Hope you are doing well. I receved your letter asking me to inform you if I happen to find a suitable job for you in my country, India. Recently, I came across a vacany for an entry level Data scientist in the company Raytheon Technologies Corporation. This role is seeking candidates who are technically sound as well as possess strong aptitude in Data Analytics domain.

Back then, when we were pursuing Computer Science Engineering from University of Texas, I know how excited you used to be towards Data Science, particularly Data Mining. Also, you stood out as a champion in various Data Olympiads. So, I believe that you have the right skillset for this job and hence you would be a great fit in this organization.

Please feel free to share your latest resume with me so that I can forward to my cousin, who is currently working with RTC. He maintains an excellent rapport with Human Resources department and it would be quick to receive communication from them regarding the further steps. However, you must also apply in the company’s website by navigating to Careers section.

I really hope you find this opportunity interesting.

Best Regards,
Shyam

Votes
Average: 8.9 (1 vote)

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, however, if, really, regarding, so, then, well, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 990.0 937.175257732 106% => OK
No of words: 200.0 206.0 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76060309309 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78522889544 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 127.690721649 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.7 0.622605031667 112% => OK
syllable_count: 305.1 290.88556701 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.9835827958 44.8134815571 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.5 76.5299724578 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6666666667 16.8248392259 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.91666666667 4.34317383033 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.307686182789 0.216113520407 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106814224046 0.0766984524023 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104620954078 0.0603063233224 173% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.179672802329 0.12726935374 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0706417460303 0.0580467560999 122% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 8.37731958763 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.13 8.71597938144 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 7.59969072165 118% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 41.2886597938 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.