In many places new homes are needed, but the only space available for building them is in the countryside. Some people believe it is more important to protect the countryside and not build new homes there. What is your opinion about this?
With rising population across the globe, real estate sector has become a booming business and noticing greater demand for the past few decades. While it has been an ongoing debate on the choice of locations for constructing new houses, some argue that countryside should not be brought into urban limits so as to use the rural areas as places for new constructions. I personally think promoting new buildings in countryside has more advantages that overweigh the disadvantages in the long run.
To begin with, this move will help the local folks by providing them with top class amenities such as well constructed roads, educational institutions, and advanced medical facilities. According to a survey conducted by the Ministry of Rural Welfare in 2018, only 10% people from remote areas show interest in moving out to urban areas in order to pursue tertiary education at Universities. This mindset leaves them in under development which makes them stay away from growth. This is the very reason behind the government's agenda to create awareness about the opportunities one can avail as well as make the local crowd understand how such avenues can help them lay a foundation for the future of the upcoming generations.
Considering spaces for constructing new homes in the countryside will also play a significant role in reducing the traffic congestion that the urban areas experience on a day-to-day basis. Currently, construction companies are exploring the advanced technologies to build skyscrapers in the cities. While modern advances in the construction techniques and materials are handy to solve the rising demand of new houses, it is indirectly deploring the air quality that is leading to air pollution causing novel health issues. This could also add to the global warming challenge that scientists are worried about.
To conclude, it is crucial to protect the heritage of the local communities but at the same time it takes higher precedence to safeguard the planet for the upcoming generations. I think it would be the need of the hour for the government to come up with policies that can prove to be a win-win for both the parties involved.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 305, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
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Line 3, column 513, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'governments'' or 'government's'?
Suggestion: governments'; government's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, well, while, as to, i think, such as, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1812.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 353.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13314447592 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33454660006 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90916776211 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 176.041082164 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.603399433428 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 566.1 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 50.9593178036 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.384615385 106.682146367 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.1538461538 20.7667163134 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.30769230769 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.271406034801 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0811392515558 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0602879391074 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140146124702 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.061380928244 0.056905535591 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.77 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.94 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 78.4519038076 141% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.