You took your family to a nearby restaurant. You were disappointed with the meal and wish to complain to the manager. Write a letter to the manager of the restaurant.
In the letter:
explain why you were at the restaurant
describe the problems
write about the action you want the manager to take
Dear Mr Mark,
I am writing this letter to seek your attention regarding a very concerning issue that I and my family faced last night during our visit to your hotel. First let me tell you that I am very fond of the traditional food that is the specialty of your hotel. I was the one who convinced and encouraged my family to have at least one meal at your restaurant as ambiance and taste that I used to had, was phenomenal.
We were there at your restaurant at 08:00PM and we ordered soup and prawn as starter and three of your Chef specials from main menu. Initially all was going smooth, soup was great as usual and so were the prawns. We were anxiously waiting for the main course as we were expecting that as good as starter was. But to our surprise, food served to us was totally bland in taste and was stale as well. Upon asking, the server started arguing and misbehaving with us and we were asked to pay for that rotten food.
I have no issues in paying the bill but the way your staff behaved with me and my family, left us speechless and turn us from promoter to detractor for this beautiful food place. I urge you to take necessary action against the staff and immediately conduct their training on behavioral aspects as it is essential in service industry. Hope to get some ears to my complaint.
Yours sincerely,
Jacob Martin
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, regarding, so, well, as to, at least
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.0 200% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 6.8 221% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 44.0 5.60731707317 785% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1098.0 965.302439024 114% => OK
No of words: 249.0 196.424390244 127% => OK
Chars per words: 4.40963855422 4.92477711251 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 3.73543355544 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38469688755 2.65546596893 90% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 106.607317073 136% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582329317269 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 337.5 283.868780488 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 1.53170731707 457% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.1148174548 43.030603864 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.5 112.824112599 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.75 22.9334400587 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.33333333333 5.23603664747 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 3.70975609756 243% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180795542612 0.215688989381 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.060924715633 0.103423049105 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0361378329515 0.0843802449381 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110918017126 0.15604864568 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0425811535794 0.0819641961636 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 13.2329268293 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 61.2550243902 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.3 11.4140731707 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 40.7170731707 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.