Dear Robin,
I hope this epistle of mine finds you and your family in relishing health. I am writing this missive in response to your curiosity about IT jobs opportunity in India. In retrospect I know how much you were into all these new technologies, you wanted to know and experiment all aspects of it.
I have come to in knowledge of job suitable for you, its an opening for the 'Research and Development' department of Wipro Tech they required interns for the Data Analyst for Cloud Computing project. These technologies are one of the hot cakes in the Information Technology market and have a very shining future ahead.
If possible try to make a candidature account on the companies website and upload your CV. also send me one copy of your CV too so I could meanwhile search for other opportunities. With brief details on the website you are good to go, It may be a possibility they ask for face to face round provide the option of skype otherwise you are always welcome in India.
Please feel free to write for any further help from my side, I will be there with open arms and a warm heart for you.
Your study buddy,
ABC
- Nowadays food has become easier to prepare. Has this change improved the way people live?Give reasons for your answer using your own ideas and experience. 89
- You are very disturbed by the noise coming from a restaurant opened nearby recently. Write a letter to the restaurant manager and say– What problem do you experience?– What should the management do about it?– 81
- Government investment in the arts, such as music and theatre, is a waste of money. Governments must invest this money in public services instead.To what extent do you agree with this statement?? 89
- You missed an appointment. Write a letter explaining what happened. In your letter include:what the appointment wasa apology for missing the appointmenta request to reschedule 73
- Write a letter to the publisher in a newspaper, asking to advertise a meeting of people from different countries you are organizing.Explain where, when and why. 84
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 54, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...o in knowledge of job suitable for you, its an opening for the Research and Develop...
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Line 6, column 54, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'companies'' or 'company's'?
Suggestion: companies'; company's
...ry to make a candidature account on the companies website and upload your CV. also send m...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 939.0 937.175257732 100% => OK
No of words: 206.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.55825242718 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56281717252 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 127.690721649 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.669902912621 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 304.2 290.88556701 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 46.7718932694 44.8134815571 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.9 76.5299724578 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6 16.8248392259 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.4 4.34317383033 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.410629181857 0.216113520407 190% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.142672740072 0.0766984524023 186% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0586671995969 0.0603063233224 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.215813300765 0.12726935374 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0468156440404 0.0580467560999 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 8.37731958763 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 70.7449484536 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.17 8.71597938144 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 8.62886597938 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.