Dear James,
Hope you are doing great buddy. I am sorry for not keeping in touch with you, as much I should be. Since it's been long time I thought to drop this letter and tell you some good news. Finally, I am coming to your home country Scotland to have some good time with you.
However, I would really like to bring some gifts to your family and please recommend me something they cherish. Don't worry, I know your taste and already packed a surprise for you. Whereas, I am unable to decide suitable presents to your kids and wife and here exactly, I need your help. Perhaps, you can give me clue about their like's and interest or hobbies so that I can shop accordingly and pack it with me.
As this is first time I am visiting your place, I know nothing about climate, clothes to be prepared. Therefore, you should give me heads up about all the activities that are planned and necessity of any equipment's I should purchase for participating. One thing I am sure of enjoying is annual Edinburgh Carnival which I heard from a traveler. Further you need to tell me about that trekking , if this is right time of the year,that we planned few days back.
I almost forgot to ask you about vegetarian restaurants in your city. You know, I don't eat meat but enjoy sweet dishes. Nevertheless, I am ready to give some adventurous taste to my palate and looking forward to eat local delicacies. If not a problem, we can visit one of the local restaurant to savour one of your nation's signature meals.
See you soon and will wait for your response to book tickets.
Thank you for invitation.
Yours lovingly,
James.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: Don't
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , that
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
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Line 9, column 210, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to eating'.
Suggestion: to eating
... taste to my palate and looking forward to eat local delicacies. If not a problem, we ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, finally, first, however, if, look, nevertheless, really, so, therefore, whereas, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 4.92783505155 203% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 12.0 5.05154639175 238% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 58.0 32.9175257732 176% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 26.3917525773 129% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1338.0 937.175257732 143% => OK
No of words: 294.0 206.0 143% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.55102040816 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 3.78020617076 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45099983116 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 127.690721649 139% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605442176871 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 408.6 290.88556701 140% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.13402061856 175% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.83505154639 272% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 12.6804123711 150% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.8013410982 44.8134815571 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.4210526316 76.5299724578 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4736842105 16.8248392259 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.63157894737 4.34317383033 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 7.41237113402 175% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.305489737842 0.216113520407 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105075125919 0.0766984524023 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0535220127828 0.0603063233224 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17611379256 0.12726935374 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0388453308776 0.0580467560999 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.7 8.37731958763 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.81 8.71597938144 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.5 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 41.2886597938 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.