A friend you met last year has invited you to visit him/her in his/her country. You have never been there before and need some information before you leave.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter:
request advise about a gift for his/her family
ask about activities and clothing in his/her country
find out about the food
Dear Jack,
I am writing to say that I agree to visit Canada the next month, but I have never been to it. I would, therefore, like to ask some information relating to the country prior to my departure.
I need a few details about what your parents prefer. I am concerned about what to bring to them as present, because I am unaware of what is popular in your homeland. I want to purchase local souvenirs, for example, a furry camel, chess and books about Karaganda city. It would, hence, be nice, if you help me with it. I also need to know what type of clothes to include in my luggage. Unfortunately, I easily catch a cold, if I do not wear inappropriate outfit. I would be grateful, if you inform me regarding to usual garment in Toronto.
Finally, I want to learn about traditional cousin in your region. I have already heard that the food in your country is considerably different from that in Kazakhstan. It is important to me, since I am allergic to milk-made dishes, that may either hurt or kill me.
I am looking forward to your reply as soon as possible, as it is necessary for me to find out what I can expect in your hometown. You can either send me this information to my email address “tolikxxx@mail.ru” or call me on the following number 87001444413.
Best wishes,
Tolegen
- Today, majority of children are raised by their grandparents. To what extent do you think it affects the whole family? 78
- What are the pros and cons of using public transport? 84
- What are the advantages and disadvantages of leaving your country to live or study abroad 73
- Should the government provide people with free accommodation? 78
- In western countries there is an increasing number of couples choosing to have no children.What are the advantages and disadvantages to couples having no children? 89
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...the country prior to my departure. I need a few details about what your pare...
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Line 9, column 54, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...details about what your parents prefer. I am concerned about what to bring to the...
^
Line 9, column 167, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...re of what is popular in your homeland. I want to purchase local souvenirs, for e...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, hence, if, look, may, regarding, so, therefore, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 32.9175257732 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 26.3917525773 144% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1089.0 937.175257732 116% => OK
No of words: 237.0 206.0 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.59493670886 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92362132708 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09946559306 2.54303337028 122% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 127.690721649 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.603375527426 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 338.4 290.88556701 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.13402061856 164% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 1.83505154639 327% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.3812807864 44.8134815571 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.6 76.5299724578 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8 16.8248392259 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.26666666667 4.34317383033 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167196051665 0.216113520407 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0530154105919 0.0766984524023 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.03503529157 0.0603063233224 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0968182622672 0.12726935374 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0251080142264 0.0580467560999 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 8.37731958763 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.05 8.71597938144 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.71 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 41.2886597938 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.