A friend you met last year has invited you to visit him/her in his/her country. You have never been there before and need some information before you leave.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter:
request advise about a gift for his/her family
ask about activities and clothing in his/her country
find out about the food
Dear Mark,
I hope this letter sees you in the best of health. I got your letter yesterday where you ask me to visit you in London. I cannot express my feelings and happiness as it would be a pleasure to be there and be your guest. I have talked to my parent and they have shown me green signal as well so be ready for a month full of fun and activities as I have ample time to spend there with you and family.
I am planning to leave Lahore on Thursday, 17th July 2018, however there are a few queries that I need to know before leaving for London. First and foremost thing is to know about liking and disliking of your family as I am visiting them for the first time and it is a must that I should bring them some gifts and it will be easy if you tell me about their choices in this regard. I am not in a mood to listen a “No” in this matter as it is part of our culture and tradition.
In continuation, I would like to know about weather conditions there so that I can pack my bag with clothing that are more appropriate according to the conditions and culture too. Do guide me as you know usually I wear jeans and tees in Lahore which suits the weather conditions here. Also tell me about the activities we can plan during my visit as it will help me prepare my bags accordingly.
Last but not the least, I am a food lover and that’s evident from my physique as well - I would love to know about the places we can visit to fulfill my appetite. We will try to visit all sort of food including desi, continental, Chinese and anything special you feel that we should try this as well.
I will wait for your timely response so that I can manage the things at my end in this short span of time. See you soon and take care.
Yours sincerely,
ZeeQ
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 221, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...pleasure to be there and be your guest. I have talked to my parent and they have ...
^
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...e to spend there with you and family. I am planning to leave Lahore on Thursday...
^
Line 3, column 411, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...is regard. I am not in a mood to listen a 'No' in this matter as it is ...
^
Line 4, column 199, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[9]
Message: The adverb 'usually' is usually put before the verb 'know'.
Suggestion: usually know
...ons and culture too. Do guide me as you know usually I wear jeans and tees in Lahore which s...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, first, however, if, so, well, sort of, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 4.92783505155 325% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 16.0 5.05154639175 317% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 9.0 3.03092783505 297% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 70.0 32.9175257732 213% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 26.3917525773 152% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1427.0 937.175257732 152% => OK
No of words: 346.0 206.0 168% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.12427745665 4.54256449028 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31289638616 3.78020617076 114% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.32854452588 2.54303337028 92% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 127.690721649 139% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.511560693642 0.622605031667 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 445.5 290.88556701 153% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 16.3608247423 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 57.9064379457 44.8134815571 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.1333333333 76.5299724578 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0666666667 16.8248392259 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.73333333333 4.34317383033 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216157334209 0.216113520407 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.08382269173 0.0766984524023 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0713862394901 0.0603063233224 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119303707894 0.12726935374 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0629004546455 0.0580467560999 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 8.37731958763 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 73.51 70.7449484536 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.91 8.71597938144 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.69 7.59969072165 88% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 8.54432989691 131% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.