It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance for sport or music, and others are not. However, it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion?
There is no gainsaying that given topic has grabbed immediate attention owing to its uniqueness. The topic has two dimensions, one group of people asserts that people are born with different talents like musician or sports; however, other group is of the opinion that talent is not only GOD gifted but can also be taught. Before reaching to a final verdict let’s discuss both views in detail.
To begin with, it is undoubtedly true that some people are actually born with certain talents. I would like to put an example to assert my point here, a famous celebrity Sachin Tehndulkar (famous cricketer) has performed outstandingly great in the field of cricket. He had broken certain records of total runs made and as of now he is retired but no one has manage to break his records. He is considered to be the legend of cricket. His performance showed his passion, interest, ambition throughout his career. Another prominent example with God gifted talent is Justin Beiber (a famous singer). He is born with great voice and he became star in early teenage. His family is not connected or involved with music industry previously.
On the contrary, we cannot say that people cannot be taught to be stars. Every human being has the capacity to shine out in different fields of life. It is dependent on their coach or mentors how they polish their resources. I would like to give a perfect example here that how people can shine out in different fields at the same time. Imran Khan (famously known for his cricket) has shown tremendous performance throughout his cricket career. Whereas, now he is a great politician and everyone loves him in this field as well. Although he and his family never been into politics before.
To recapitulate the aforementioned argument, it is a universal truth that people are born with talents, however, we cannot overlook human intelligence which, if put into right direction and focus can always create musicians and sports person out of a layman.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 154, Rule ID: FAMOUS_CELEBRITY[1]
Message: Use simply 'celebrity'.
Suggestion: celebrity
...t an example to assert my point here, a famous celebrity Sachin Tehndulkar famous cricketer has ...
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Line 2, column 357, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'managed'.
Suggestion: managed
... as of now he is retired but no one has manage to break his records. He is considered ...
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Line 3, column 555, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[4]
Message: The adverb 'never' is usually put after the verb 'been'.
Suggestion: been never
...eld as well. Although he and his family never been into politics before. To recapitulate...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, however, if, look, so, well, whereas, on the contrary, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1644.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 337.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87833827893 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60783763382 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572700296736 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 513.9 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 54.3160954704 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.5263157895 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7368421053 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.68421052632 7.06120827912 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210975677275 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0568157426238 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.06506271623 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134711754996 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0462940394516 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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