A friend you met last year has invited you to visit him/her in his/her country. You have never been there before and need some information before you leave.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter:
request advise about a gift for his/her family
ask about activities and clothing in his/her country
find out about the food
Dear Jack,
I am writing to say that I agree to visit Canada the next month, but I have never been to it. Therefore, I would like to ask some information relating to the country prior to my departure.
First of all, I need a few details about what your parents prefer. I am concerned about what to bring to them as present, because I am unaware of what is popular in your homeland. I want to purchase local souvenirs, for example, a furry camel, chess and books about Karaganda city. Hence, it would be nice, if you help me with it. Secondly, I need to know what type of clothes to include in my luggage. Unfortunately, I easily catch a cold, if I do not wear inappropriate outfit. I would be grateful, if you inform me regarding to usual garment in Toronto. Finally, I want to learn about traditional cousin in your region. I have already heard that the food in your country is considerably different from that in Kazakhstan. It is important to me, since I am allergic to milk-made dishes, that may either hurt or kill me.
I am looking forward to your reply as soon as possible, as it is necessary for me to find out what I can expect in your hometown. You can either send me this information to my email address “tolikxxx@mail.ru” or call me on the following number 87001444413.
Best wishes,
Tolegen
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, hence, if, look, may, regarding, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 32.9175257732 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 26.3917525773 148% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1097.0 937.175257732 117% => OK
No of words: 240.0 206.0 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.57083333333 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93597934253 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09541551689 2.54303337028 122% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 127.690721649 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 342.0 290.88556701 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.13402061856 164% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 1.83505154639 327% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.3988661913 44.8134815571 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.1333333333 76.5299724578 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 16.8248392259 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.46666666667 4.34317383033 172% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16662742749 0.216113520407 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0521879697994 0.0766984524023 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0340701389087 0.0603063233224 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108740783867 0.12726935374 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0238625841023 0.0580467560999 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 8.37731958763 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.93 8.71597938144 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 41.2886597938 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.