Prison is th best punishment for criminals. Discuss.
Nowadays, the crime rate has increased dramatically. To deal with this alarming trend, some politician claim that sentencing criminals to prison is the best form of punishment, while guards in prisons are opposed to them and argue that it may deteriorate the situation. In this essay, I will discuss both opinions and agree with the politicians.
Let us start by looking at reasons why some politicians believe that prison is the best form penalty. The first reason is that it brings relief to victims. Take the victims of rape for example. Women tend to feel protected, if they know the rapist is behind the bars, since they no longer fear being under attack again. Another reason is that it can make the convict bring an end to their anti-social lifestyle. Ex-prisoners usually refuse to return to criminal life, when they serve their sentence and go back to society as a normal citizen. After the consideration of the reasons, it is clear that jail is one of best methods of punishment for villains.
On the other hand, some guards in prisons state that prison is the worst form of penalty. They justify their point of view with the following arguments. First of all, jail is too harsh for petty crimes. What I mean by this is that criminals, who are found guilty for non-serious crimes such as shoplifting, should not rub shoulders with either murderers or terrorists, because they can learn to commit more severe crimes from them as soon as they are released. Secondly, ex-prisoners face problems in public. Former inmates often face negative attitude in society owing to social fear and prejudice after they are released from jail. As a result, they cannot find a job and eventually resort to crime again when they have to make a living. After the analysis of the argumentations, it is obvious that prison is not an appropriate kind of punishment.
In conclusion, even though some jail guards make a statement that imprisonment is not the greatest sort of punishment, personally, I believe that prison is one of the most appropriate ways of punishing offenders in most cases.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 613, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'of the best'.
Suggestion: of the best
...e reasons, it is clear that jail is one of best methods of punishment for villains. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, while, for example, i mean, in conclusion, kind of, sort of, such as, as a result, first of all, in most cases, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1736.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 355.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89014084507 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34067318298 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71234695911 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571830985915 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 532.8 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 9.0 2.10420841683 428% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.1936665019 49.4020404114 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.3684210526 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6842105263 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.10526315789 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 16.0 3.9879759519 401% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.238719378409 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.065258577387 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0627277486836 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139175461243 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0477110481151 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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