many young children have unsupervised access to the internet and using the internet to socialize with others. this can lead to a number of dangerous sitiations which can be threatening for children.
what problems do children face when going online without parental supervision?
how can these problems be solved?
Two days, I read an article about the negative impacts of uncontrolled online access on children. This essay will discuss the problems with such an online connection and suggest possible solutions to them.
The first problem is the high possibility for children to encounter abusers in the social networking. At young ages, people hardly distinguish an abuser from an adequate internet user since they have little experience in it. Therefore, many abusers take an advantage of the Internet and trick children for illegal actions. Another trouble for young children having an uncontrolled connection to the internet is that they are exposed to prohibited content. Many websites publish violent images and videos of crimes, which may spoil their view of the world as well as encourage them to break the law. In addition to those images, children can open porno sites and be misled about the healthy relationship with the opposite gender.
A possible solution to the problem with internet offenders is for parents to regularly check the online friends of their children. If they do this, abusers will have no opportunity to seduce the youth. To deal with prohibited images and videos, parents could limit the range of websites by setting a special mode in the browser for young children. This mode will block IP-addresses with inadequate content so parents could protect the psychology of their children. For example, the Google chrome offers modes both for parents and children protected by password.
In conclusion, the internet poses many threats to young people, but to make it safer parents need to take actions, including taking control of the acquaintances online and restricting the access to dangerous websites. A safe internet is possible if parents take control of what their children see online
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, so, therefore, well, for example, in addition, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1522.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23024054983 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65198156543 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.563573883162 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 468.0 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.362387338 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.466666667 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.2 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.383919676788 0.244688304435 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.136422944309 0.084324248473 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.053086674877 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.220852831356 0.151304729494 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0543745779597 0.056905535591 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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