A friend of yours recently gave you a nice birthday present. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter,
Thank her for the present and say why you like it
Describe some other presents that you received
Explain some of the things you did on your birthday
Dear Yagnika,
Just writing this letter to say thanks for a valuable birthday gift that you bought for me on my 31st birthday.
First thing is, I would like to say thank you for a precious present on my natal day. I really like the saree that you gifted me, as it is ready to wear and prestitched which help me to save time. Also, it has traditional and ethnic touch that allows me to wear on any auspicious occasions.
What's more, I received many gifts from others as well. Perfume, which I received from my uncle is also good as it evoke natural aroma that I love to wear. Also, I received a pair of running shoes from my father. They have gray and pink color combination, which I really like.
Apart from this, my birthday party was the most enjoyable. On that day, we dressed up according to the theme decided and after some time waiter brought out cake, which I cut. It was really great to get together with close friends and relatives. We had some interesting conversations. The food was delicious, we went home feeling full after fantastic meal.
Hope to hear from you soon!
Yours lovingly,
Kajal Desai
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: What's
...o wear on any auspicious occasions. Whats more, I received many gifts from others...
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Line 7, column 71, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...fts from others as well. Perfume, which i received from my uncle is also good as ...
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Line 7, column 115, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'evokes'?
Suggestion: evokes
...ceived from my uncle is also good as it evoke natural aroma that I love to wear. Also...
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Line 9, column 169, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ome time waiter brought out cake, which i cut. It was really great to get togethe...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, really, so, well, apart from
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 3.03092783505 297% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 928.0 937.175257732 99% => OK
No of words: 203.0 206.0 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.57142857143 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77462671648 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38230186546 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 127.690721649 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.655172413793 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 275.4 290.88556701 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 25.8863292264 44.8134815571 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 66.2857142857 76.5299724578 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5 16.8248392259 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.21428571429 4.34317383033 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240853093943 0.216113520407 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0698381396353 0.0766984524023 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.086342321456 0.0603063233224 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126243151692 0.12726935374 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0853306959755 0.0580467560999 147% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.3 8.37731958763 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.63 8.71597938144 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.98 7.59969072165 92% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.