Dear Henry,
I hope you and your family are all well. Its been too long since we last met. I am writing this letter to entail that I got your gift, I want to say thank you as it was really imperative for me.
I received your valuable gift a day before my birthday, I was speechless after unwrapping it, since, I was astonished to see the exact same watch that I discussed with you a year ago. As, I am able to recall, I had told you, how intensively I needed a watch and that I absolutely loved the design of it. To my surprise, you not only remembered it, indeed you made a point to gift it to me on my birthday. Thanks a lot for making my day so special.
Furthermore, all of my friends and family members brought beautiful and utilitarian stuffs for me such as my mom gave me a bicycle and my father gifted me a new laptop. Also, one of friend bought a nice pair of earrings which were so captivating and my cousin presented me a adorable teddy bear.
Moreover, I celebrated my birthday in a different way this time. The venue was a popular resort which was colossal and extremely enticing. The menu of food comprised of various sundry dishes, all of them were quite alluring. In addition, my dad had arranged for a live music performance by a famous artist which eventually became the center of attraction.
To recapitulate, I must say that it was the most memorable birthday and thank you so much for such a thoughtful gift.
Best wishes,
John
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 12, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Henry, I hope you and your family are all well....
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Line 7, column 274, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... captivating and my cousin presented me a adorable teddy bear. Moreover, I ce...
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Line 9, column 36, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a different way" with adverb for "different"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
... Moreover, I celebrated my birthday in a different way this time. The venue was a popular res...
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Line 9, column 81, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...different way this time. The venue was a popular resort which was colossal and ex...
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Line 14, column 5, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...a thoughtful gift. Best wishes, John
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, moreover, really, so, well, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 55.0 32.9175257732 167% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1199.0 937.175257732 128% => OK
No of words: 272.0 206.0 132% => OK
Chars per words: 4.40808823529 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 3.78020617076 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64135158842 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 127.690721649 129% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.606617647059 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 380.7 290.88556701 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.2036073628 44.8134815571 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.9333333333 76.5299724578 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1333333333 16.8248392259 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.73333333333 4.34317383033 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 7.41237113402 175% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.261150485311 0.216113520407 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0836724842305 0.0766984524023 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.081443669284 0.0603063233224 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151118048089 0.12726935374 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100314858127 0.0580467560999 173% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 8.37731958763 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.0 8.71597938144 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.66 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 41.2886597938 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.