A friend of yours is thinking about applying for the same course that you did at university He She has asked for your advice about studying this subject Write a letter to your friend In your letter Give details of the course you took at the university Exp

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A friend of yours is thinking about applying for the same course that you did at university. He/She has asked for your advice about studying this subject.

Write a letter to your friend. In your letter

Give details of the course you took at the university
Explain why you recommend the university
Give some advice about how to apply

Dear Bill,

I am happy to know that you are considering to pursue into Systems Engineering course from Amity University. Although the course curriculum might have slighlty changed from what it used to be, I am very confident that the core subjects would remain the same. I must tell you that you have picked up one of the best Universities and let me help you with some tips to avail a hassle free admission.

Let me start by giving the details of the course I pursued. I now hold a Postgraduate degree from Amity University for having completed the Master of Science in Systems Engineering that I enrolled for in the year 2018. The core curriculum includes Fundamentals of Aviation, hands-on courses on tools used across the industry, and a complete practical refresher on Communication Skills which is going to be handy during the campus placements.

One of the main aspects to consider when choosing an instituion is the approvals it has from the appropriate authorities. Amity University stands in the top list because of having accrediations from UGC, AICTE that are very much valued by Universities from the other countries too. Also, I am happy to share that the faculty here is very experienced and passionate. Furthermore, lab infrastructure of the University is outstanding too.

I would like to inform you that there is a Student Assistance Desk that's available for all the new applicants. Most of the applicants do not pay much attention to their service, but the team is friendly and well equipped to handle all types of concerns that a student could possibly have. I would highly recommend you to apply via Online Application as it helps you stay updated with the process.

I hope my advice helps you.

Yours friendly
Shyam

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Average: 7.5 (2 votes)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 68, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: that's
...that there is a Student Assistance Desk thats available for all the new applicants. M...
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Line 9, column 269, Rule ID: MAY_COULD_POSSIBLY[1]
Message: Use simply 'could'.
Suggestion: could
...le all types of concerns that a student could possibly have. I would highly recommend you to a...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, so, well

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 3.03092783505 330% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 26.3917525773 159% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1462.0 937.175257732 156% => OK
No of words: 296.0 206.0 144% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93918918919 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 3.78020617076 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87783905619 2.54303337028 113% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 127.690721649 139% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601351351351 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 454.5 290.88556701 156% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.0042796658 44.8134815571 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.4666666667 76.5299724578 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7333333333 16.8248392259 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.13333333333 4.34317383033 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 7.41237113402 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220192774571 0.216113520407 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0776552109989 0.0766984524023 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0666942924391 0.0603063233224 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0996581155811 0.12726935374 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.028285544267 0.0580467560999 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 8.37731958763 140% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 8.71597938144 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 7.59969072165 111% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 41.2886597938 177% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 75.8426966292 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 68, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: that's
...that there is a Student Assistance Desk thats available for all the new applicants. M...
^^^^^
Line 9, column 269, Rule ID: MAY_COULD_POSSIBLY[1]
Message: Use simply 'could'.
Suggestion: could
...le all types of concerns that a student could possibly have. I would highly recommend you to a...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, so, well

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 3.03092783505 330% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 26.3917525773 159% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1462.0 937.175257732 156% => OK
No of words: 296.0 206.0 144% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93918918919 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 3.78020617076 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87783905619 2.54303337028 113% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 127.690721649 139% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601351351351 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 454.5 290.88556701 156% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.0042796658 44.8134815571 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.4666666667 76.5299724578 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7333333333 16.8248392259 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.13333333333 4.34317383033 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 7.41237113402 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220192774571 0.216113520407 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0776552109989 0.0766984524023 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0666942924391 0.0603063233224 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0996581155811 0.12726935374 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.028285544267 0.0580467560999 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 8.37731958763 140% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 8.71597938144 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 7.59969072165 111% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 41.2886597938 177% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 75.8426966292 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.