Dear Keshav,
I was pleased to receive your letter last week and I'm writing to answer your queries related to a camping trip to Ladakh based on my experiences. Personally, I thoroughly enjoyed my last camping there. Unfortunately, this summer I won't be able to join you.
I believe that you should go camping as it is one of the adventurous activities in the summer and you would definitely enjoy it. The reason why camping is so popular among travellers in Ladakh is due to the beautiful night view of the landscape, stargazing and barbecue, hence, don't miss it.
Besides fun and excitement, there are some cons to camping. Firstly, walking while carrying all the luggage to find the place is a difficult task. Secondly, an uncomfortable tent surface to sleep if you don't carry an inflated mattress may cause back pain. Lastly, a lot of preparation is required so better make the list of all the items before going such as charger, first aid box, food, etc.
Though I would have loved to join you this summer, sadly I’m too busy with my project that's why I won't be able to accompany you. I hope you enjoy your camping trip to Ladakh and have a good time there. Do not hesitate to contact me for any further help.
I can't wait to hear from you.
Your friend,
Suchi
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, firstly, hence, if, lastly, may, second, secondly, so, while, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1056.0 937.175257732 113% => OK
No of words: 229.0 206.0 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.61135371179 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89008302616 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53296189456 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 127.690721649 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.655021834061 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 324.0 290.88556701 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.9996117996 44.8134815571 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.4285714286 76.5299724578 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3571428571 16.8248392259 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.07142857143 4.34317383033 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.308368581226 0.216113520407 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100250395212 0.0766984524023 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106422286717 0.0603063233224 176% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125501495724 0.12726935374 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0876763675035 0.0580467560999 151% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 8.37731958763 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.16 8.71597938144 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.46 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.