some people like to try new things, for example, places to visit and types of food. Other people prefer to keep doing things they are familiar with
Nowadays, some people like to try new things, for example, places to visit and types of food. Other people prefer to keep doing things they are familiar with. In this essay, I would examine the reason way of people choose new things and other people enjoy what they familiar with. The end of article, there is a conclusion both of reasons.
In the one hand, some of reasons people attempt to come to new premises or eat new food that never ate it. They want to get new experience. It is due to they can enjoy it with their friend or family. For example, they visit place where have different culture than their region or try new food with different ingredients and tastes. As a result, they have adequate knowledge about them. As usually they attempt new things with their partner, so they not awkward to try it
However, some of people enjoy to do things familiar with. Firstly, they do not think too much to choose a new place or new food, because they can enjoy it and that are the best what they choose. For example, someone prefer to cafe shop where they ever came. So they know menu which provide and appropriate with their taste. In this way they not disappointment and satisfy.
In conclusion, no doubt both of them, because that way to enjoy it and most important choose places or foods is they can savor and use time without wastage. But select new things is no bad idea with friend or family.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...r partner, so they not awkward to try it However, some of people enjoy to do thin...
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Line 3, column 10, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'some of', you should use 'the' ('some of the people') or simply say ''some people''.
Suggestion: some of the people; some people
...o they not awkward to try it However, some of people enjoy to do things familiar with. First...
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Line 3, column 25, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'enjoy doing'.
Suggestion: enjoy doing
...ard to try it However, some of people enjoy to do things familiar with. Firstly, they do ...
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Line 3, column 217, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'someone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'prefers'.
Suggestion: prefers
... what they choose. For example, someone prefer to cafe shop where they ever came. So t...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s is no bad idea with friend or family.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, so, for example, in conclusion, no doubt, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1152.0 1615.20841683 71% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.48249027237 5.12529762239 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.17309514364 2.80592935109 77% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 176.041082164 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.494163424125 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 351.9 506.74238477 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.4443083401 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.0 106.682146367 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0625 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.4375 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.562535559284 0.244688304435 230% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.19509740966 0.084324248473 231% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.172741629496 0.0667982634062 259% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.3829497445 0.151304729494 253% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.201504812984 0.056905535591 354% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.7 13.0946893788 59% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 50.2224549098 144% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.3001002004 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.41 12.4159519038 68% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.7 8.58950901804 78% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 78.4519038076 47% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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