A friend of yours is thinking of going on a camping holiday for the first time this summer. He/she has asked for your advice.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter
- Explain why you think your friend would enjoy a camping holiday
- Describe some possible disadvantages
- Say whether you would like to go camping with your friend this summer
Dear David,
I hope this letter finds you well. I hope you enjoy your upcomming camping trip. I would be glad to give you some useful advice since I've been to quite a few camping trips in the past.
I have to say camping is an unforgettable experience and a great chance to get away from the hustle and bustle of the city. Specially for a busy bussiness person like you, it will be a great opportunity to relax for a few days.
However, I must mention that you'll have no Internet connection where you camp so your clients won't be able to reach you. Furthermore, you won't have access to any source of power, so make sure you've charged your electronical devices before you leave and don't forget your power banks.
I would love to accompany you on your trip this summer; but I'm afaird I can't. I've just been invited to attend my collegues wedding.
Hope to see you soon,
Sam
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- A friend of yours is thinking of going on a camping holiday for the first time this summer He she has asked for your advice Write a letter to your friend In your letter Explain why you think your friend would enjoy a camping holiday Describe some possible 73
- A friend of yours is thinking of going on a camping holiday for the first time this summer He she has asked for your advice Write a letter to your friend In your letter Explain why you think your friend would enjoy a camping holiday Describe some possible 89
- A friend of yours is thinking of going on a camping holiday for the first time this summer He She has asked for your advice Write a letter to your friend In your letter 1 why you think your friend would enjoy camping 2 Describe some possible disadvantages 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 12, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear David, I hope this letter finds you well. I hop...
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Line 3, column 82, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... you enjoy your upcomming camping trip. I would be glad to give you some useful a...
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Line 3, column 135, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I've
...ad to give you some useful advice since Ive been to quite a few camping trips in th...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...te a few camping trips in the past. I have to say camping is an unforgettable...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: you'll
... days. However, I must mention that youll have no Internet connection where you c...
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Line 7, column 193, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: you've
...ss to any source of power, so make sure youve charged your electronical devices befor...
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Line 7, column 254, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...ectronical devices before you leave and dont forget your power banks. I would lov...
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Line 9, column 61, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...mpany you on your trip this summer; but Im afaird I cant. Ive just been invited to...
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Line 9, column 73, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
... your trip this summer; but Im afaird I cant. Ive just been invited to attend my col...
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Line 9, column 79, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I've
...trip this summer; but Im afaird I cant. Ive just been invited to attend my collegue...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 727.0 937.175257732 78% => OK
No of words: 163.0 206.0 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.46012269939 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57311423478 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33543383443 2.54303337028 92% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 127.690721649 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.680981595092 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 228.6 290.88556701 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.2965259048 44.8134815571 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.7 76.5299724578 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3 16.8248392259 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 4.34317383033 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 2.54639175258 393% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.277558277008 0.216113520407 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110824733555 0.0766984524023 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0797837211796 0.0603063233224 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136634515973 0.12726935374 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0737332954993 0.0580467560999 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.7 8.37731958763 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.29 8.71597938144 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.24 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 41.2886597938 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.