Dear Jimmy,
How are you doing? I hope you are doing well. I'm writing just to say thank you to your guys.
Thank you for sending photos of us enjoying vacation in Australia to me. These photos are a reminder of pleasant memory. I am grateful for your effort in taking these pictures and sending back to me. Besides, I appreciate your inviting me to celebrate holiday with you. During my staying with you in Australia, I had a wonderful time.
I am sorry that I did not write you earlier. After I arrived in China on 8 October 2016, I was preparing my immigration to Australia. I fall love with Australia, especially the climate of Brisbane and nice people living there.
As a reciprecate for your kindness of inviting me, I'd like to invite you to visit China. You can experience the spectecular landscape in China. All the accommodation will be my treat.
I am looking forward to your affirmative reply.
All the best
Jim
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'd
...ecate for your kindness of inviting me, Id like to invite you to visit China. You ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, look, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 778.0 937.175257732 83% => OK
No of words: 166.0 206.0 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.68674698795 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58944267634 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71258310975 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 127.690721649 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.638554216867 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 244.8 290.88556701 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.360824742268 277% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 10.0 16.3608247423 61% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 22.3075099462 44.8134815571 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 48.625 76.5299724578 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 10.375 16.8248392259 62% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.4375 4.34317383033 33% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 7.41237113402 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.340935176867 0.216113520407 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107404891981 0.0766984524023 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0831546383396 0.0603063233224 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174306807708 0.12726935374 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0984628359069 0.0580467560999 170% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.8 8.37731958763 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.79 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.44 8.71597938144 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.37 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.0 8.62886597938 46% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.0 8.54432989691 70% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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