The graph below shows the average carbon dioxide CO2 emissions per person in the United Kingdom Sweden Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

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The graph below shows the average carbon dioxide (CO2) emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Given is a bar chart depicting the average carbon dioxide released by each person in the 4 separate countries, namely United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal over a period of 40 years, commencing from 1967 to 2007.
Perceptibly, the figure recorded for the United Kingdom and Sweden surged over a 40-year period while the opposite was true for Italy and Portugal.
According to figures from the United Kingdom and Sweden, there was a 2-tonnes disparity in the amount of CO2 emissions per head in these countries with the higher one belonging to the United Kingdom with 11 tonnes recorded. While the figure taken in the UK plummeted uninterruptedly to 9 percent over 40 years, the average number of CO2 permeated into the environment per person in Sweden experienced a marginal leap to more than 10 tonnes before being bisected in 2007.
In terms of the remaining countries, the amount of CO2 dispersing into the atmosphere in Italy initiated at 4 tonnes before leaping continuously by 2 times in 2007. Likewise, a corresponding trend was witnessed in Portugal with 0,5 and 5 tonnes recorded in 1967 and 2007 respectively.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
likewise, so, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 32.9175257732 3% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 26.3917525773 140% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 940.0 937.175257732 100% => OK
No of words: 188.0 206.0 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70287850203 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8488598976 2.54303337028 112% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 127.690721649 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.553191489362 0.622605031667 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 295.2 290.88556701 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 9.13402061856 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 12.6804123711 47% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 16.3608247423 189% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 45.5045785242 44.8134815571 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 156.666666667 76.5299724578 205% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 31.3333333333 16.8248392259 186% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.16666666667 4.34317383033 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.260046698302 0.216113520407 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.130793771206 0.0766984524023 171% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.062288196179 0.0603063233224 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160830069452 0.12726935374 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0657640585742 0.0580467560999 113% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.8 8.37731958763 212% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 40.01 70.7449484536 57% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 7.45979381443 206% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 8.71597938144 141% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.46 7.59969072165 124% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 41.2886597938 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 8.62886597938 203% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 14.4 8.54432989691 169% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 8.15463917526 221% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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