Before us, there is a line graph that illustrates the average emissions of carbon dioxide per capita, in four different countries in Europe, during a forty year period, between 1967 until 2007.
Overall, the main polluting country is the United Kingdom, during the whole studied period. While, in the other hand, the one that produce the least emissions is Portugal, which is joined by Sweden in 2007.
First of all, the UK in 1967 contribute to air pollution with more than 10 metric tonnes of co2. Although this values gradually decrease over time, after 40 years still remains above 8 tonnes. In Sweden we can see a different picture, starting by an increase in the first 10 years, the followed by a sharp decrease afterwards, until reach levels less than 6 tonnes in 2007, similar with values presented by Portugal.
In contrast, Italy the tendency is the opposite, starting low at approximately 4 tonnes but a progressive increase leads to the second place in the ones that most pollutes. Moreover, in Portugal, although it begins on the bottom with only one tonne, the overall increase makes a rise until more than 5, joining in the end with Sweden.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, moreover, second, still, while, in contrast, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 5.05154639175 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 32.9175257732 21% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 26.3917525773 144% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 967.0 937.175257732 103% => OK
No of words: 198.0 206.0 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88383838384 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75116612262 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52343874256 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 127.690721649 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.646464646465 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 293.4 290.88556701 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 9.13402061856 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 0.824742268041 606% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 5.0 1.83505154639 272% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 1.44329896907 762% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 16.3608247423 147% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 47.5957915682 44.8134815571 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.875 76.5299724578 158% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.75 16.8248392259 147% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.125 4.34317383033 210% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160997874212 0.216113520407 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0664364443194 0.0766984524023 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0626020799046 0.0603063233224 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10629339089 0.12726935374 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0699242663406 0.0580467560999 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 8.37731958763 166% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 70.7449484536 79% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 7.45979381443 154% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.32 8.71597938144 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.13 7.59969072165 120% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 41.2886597938 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 8.54432989691 136% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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