The graph below shows the percentage of people going to cinemas in one European country on different days Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

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The graph below shows the percentage of people going to cinemas in one European country on different days.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar graph provides information about the percentages of people going to the movies for three years on all the days of the week in a European country on distinct days.

Overall, the number of people going to watch movies have significantly increased for all the three years, and the amount of people at cinemas was the highest in 2005 on a Saturday. The graph depicts that out of all the days Saturdays had more theater visitors.

In the years 2007 and 2003 the number of people visiting movie theatres were 10% and almost 13% respectively. In 2003, people going to movies increased drastically from Monday to Tuesday (20%). However, it plummeted to around 16% on Wednesday. After which it continued to increase steadily reaching to 30% on Sundays. The year 2007 also had the same trend as 2003, as it increased to almost 19% on Tuesday and drastically decreased to around 8%. The highest was on Saturday, and by the end of the period it was recored to be 32%.

On a Monday, in the year 2005 the percentage of movie goers were close to 14% and then it increased to almost 17% on Tuesday. But it had a dramatic decrease reaching to 14% again. From Friday to Sunday it rose and reached to around 34%.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 243, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “After” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...t plummeted to around 16% on Wednesday. After which it continued to increase steadily...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, then

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 32.9175257732 24% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 26.3917525773 174% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 996.0 937.175257732 106% => OK
No of words: 217.0 206.0 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.58986175115 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8380880478 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52379783709 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 127.690721649 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.506912442396 0.622605031667 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 284.4 290.88556701 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 9.13402061856 11% => OK
Article: 5.0 0.824742268041 606% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 1.44329896907 416% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.1131907285 44.8134815571 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.0 76.5299724578 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0833333333 16.8248392259 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.66666666667 4.34317383033 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.13154903106 0.216113520407 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0461092488259 0.0766984524023 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0692229121896 0.0603063233224 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105164136784 0.12726935374 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0895733381971 0.0580467560999 154% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 8.37731958763 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 70.7449484536 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.05 8.71597938144 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.29 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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