The table below describes the number of employees and factories in England and Wales from 1851 to 1901.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart provides information about percentages of owned and rented houses in England and
Wales from the years 1918 to 2011.
Overall, the percentage of houses in rented accommodation had a downward trend. While, household in owned accommodations had a rapid growth by the end of the period. Although owned households initially had lower rate, it outraced rented houses at the end of the period.
Owned accommodations were around 22% in 1918 being less than rented accommodation by approximately 56%. Then it rose to almost 69% in 2001. After which in reduced to around 65% in 2011. But overall percentage of owned houses increased by the end of the period where it outraced rented houses. Percentage of rented houses were more than owned houses in the beginning of the period. However, it dramatically declined reaching to its lowest point of around 31% in 2001. Then, there was a growth of almost 5% registering to 36% in 2011.
Percentage of rented houses were more than owned houses in the beginning of the period. However, it dramatically declined reaching to its lowest point of around 31% in 2001. Then, there was a growth of almost 5% registering to 36% in 2011. Then, there was a growth of almost 5% registering to 36% in 2011.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 95, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...f owned and rented houses in England and Wales from the years 1918 to 2011. O...
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Line 5, column 81, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ted accommodation had a downward trend. While, household in owned accommodations had ...
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Line 7, column 141, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “After” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...6%. Then it rose to almost 69% in 2001. After which in reduced to around 65% in 2011....
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, then, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 33.7804878049 142% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1042.0 965.302439024 108% => OK
No of words: 213.0 196.424390244 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89201877934 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82027741392 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.809991525 2.65546596893 106% => OK
Unique words: 82.0 106.607317073 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.384976525822 0.547539520022 70% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 306.0 283.868780488 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 8.94146341463 168% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 22.4926829268 62% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.9300833448 43.030603864 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 69.4666666667 112.824112599 62% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.2 22.9334400587 62% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.66666666667 5.23603664747 32% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0270497097725 0.215688989381 13% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0108752003702 0.103423049105 11% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0326223326343 0.0843802449381 39% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0398733938393 0.15604864568 26% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0460897793939 0.0819641961636 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 13.2329268293 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 61.2550243902 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.3012195122 62% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.49 11.4140731707 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.07 8.06136585366 88% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.4329268293 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.9970731707 69% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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