The chart and table below give information about population figures in Japan Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

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The chart and table below give information about population figures in Japan.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar charts provide information about Japan's population for the past, present and future. Whereas, the table illustrates the count and the percentage of geriatrics for 4 years.

Overall, the population increases rapidly for several years then, plummeting to nearly the same number of people as the start of the period. In the case of the elderly, the population rises steadily reporting to nearly half of the nation's populace.

In 1950 the bar graph reports the overall population to be 84.1 million. It then has a rapid surge reaching the highest count of 127.1 million in 2005. However, in the later years, the population would decrease drastically and falls down to 89.9 in 2055.

With regard to the elderly, the population rises significantly. Although, at the start of the period, the count was only 4.1 million and contributed to 4.9% of the overall population. Throughout the years the population drastically increased and the count was reported to be 25.7 million in 2005 and was 20% of Japan's population. Moreover, the count would further increase in the future, and the older generation would be 36.5 million holding 41.0% of the entire countries population.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 232, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'nations'' or 'nation's'?
Suggestion: nations'; nation's
...teadily reporting to nearly half of the nations populace. In 1950 the bar graph repo...
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Line 7, column 464, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'countries'' or 'country's'?
Suggestion: countries'; country's
...6.5 million holding 41.0% of the entire countries population.
^^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, moreover, then, whereas, with regard to

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 32.9175257732 3% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 3.85567010309 311% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 989.0 937.175257732 106% => OK
No of words: 192.0 206.0 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15104166667 4.54256449028 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72241943641 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77403773826 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 127.690721649 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.536458333333 0.622605031667 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 284.4 290.88556701 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 9.13402061856 11% => OK
Article: 8.0 0.824742268041 970% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 1.44329896907 416% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.4590344503 44.8134815571 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.9090909091 76.5299724578 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4545454545 16.8248392259 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.18181818182 4.34317383033 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.137354115467 0.216113520407 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0585515167742 0.0766984524023 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.068047015142 0.0603063233224 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0959927885859 0.12726935374 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0631862622736 0.0580467560999 109% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 8.37731958763 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.29 8.71597938144 141% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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