The graph shows Underground Station Passenger Numbers in London.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.•You should write at least 150 words.•You should spend about 20 minutes on this

Essay topics:

The graph shows Underground Station Passenger Numbers in London.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

• You should write at least 150 words.

• You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The graph below illustrates information about the number of people who use Underground Station from 6:00 am to 22:00 am in London.

As we can see in the chart, there is a wild fluctuation in the subway passenger in each time zone. While people choose metro as mean of transport in 8:00 am and 18:00 pm, the number of underground station client

In the beginning of the day, the number of metro passenger is around 100 people, this figure climbed sharply and reached the top of 400 people in 8:00 am when every one start going to office. However, there is a critical decrease of passenger between 8:00 to 10:00 am. Just approximately 200 people used London subway in 10:00 am. From 10:00 am to 18:00, Although we witnessed a dramatical variation in metro client, however, the trend was still downward. Subway client bottomed out at 100 clients before peaked at approximately 400 again. After 18:00 pm, the number of people who use Underground station dropped to 140 passengers at the end of the day.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 212, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...the number of underground station client In the beginning of the day, the number ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, still, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 32.9175257732 9% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 26.3917525773 133% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 831.0 937.175257732 89% => OK
No of words: 175.0 206.0 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.74857142857 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63713576256 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60214040626 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 127.690721649 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.554285714286 0.622605031667 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 234.0 290.88556701 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 9.13402061856 11% => OK
Article: 5.0 0.824742268041 606% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 72.6945665095 44.8134815571 162% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.875 76.5299724578 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.875 16.8248392259 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.625 4.34317383033 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.109383533774 0.216113520407 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0586002488274 0.0766984524023 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.048097116934 0.0603063233224 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0986521223841 0.12726935374 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0341615627969 0.0580467560999 59% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 8.37731958763 142% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 75.54 70.7449484536 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.27 8.71597938144 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.75 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 8.62886597938 203% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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