Dear Anna;
I’m so glad that you wrote me this letter! I hope you’re doing well.
You’ll love take a break and enjoying your holidays going on a camping! Last year, I went to Kalbarri Camping with my sister and it was awesome! I totally recommend you this place if you want to rest and appreciating beautiful views, taking a track in middle of the forest and seeing wildlife. There’s an incredible lake in that area and I know you like going to kayaking every morning, so it’ll be a perfect place for you!
However, you need to be aware about some things. The mainly disadvantages of going to a camping is there you won’t to find any shop close to the area you stay in. So, be prepared to take all food and drinks that you’ll need. Other think is that during the day is pretty hot, so put some light clothes in your luggage but is essential that you don’t forget to put jackets, socks and scarfs because at night gets too cold! Be careful with insects! There are many insects so it’s pretty important that you take your insect repellent!
When are you going?
I’m going to take my holidays next month. I’d love to going a camping with you! If this sounds good for you, let me know and we can planning our trip together!
Take care!
Laura.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 10, column 133, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'plan'
Suggestion: plan
...ds good for you, let me know and we can planning our trip together! Take care! Laura...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 44.0 32.9175257732 134% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1049.0 937.175257732 112% => OK
No of words: 232.0 206.0 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.52155172414 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90276135726 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.21291189224 2.54303337028 87% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 127.690721649 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 302.4 290.88556701 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 16.3608247423 177% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 99.5891560362 44.8134815571 222% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 131.125 76.5299724578 171% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.0 16.8248392259 172% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.25 4.34317383033 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219775994723 0.216113520407 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0954134355423 0.0766984524023 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0476306788668 0.0603063233224 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127194466959 0.12726935374 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0355561082103 0.0580467560999 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 8.37731958763 172% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.42 70.7449484536 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 7.45979381443 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.53 8.71597938144 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.39 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 8.62886597938 203% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 13.6 8.54432989691 159% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 8.15463917526 172% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.