Some people think secondary school students should study international news as one of their subjects. Other people say this is a waste of valuable school time. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
There has been much discussion revolving around the issue of whether secondary school students should study international news as one of their subjects. Although, some people think is a waste of valuable school time. In this essay, I will explain why studying international news are essential for the students.
The merits of studying international news are apparent. Firstly, is extremely important that the students have knowledge about what is happening in the world currently. Everything that happen in every part of the world might affect the economy, the politic and how the population live.
Secondly, many of the problems in the world can be solved if each person do your part. For example, the global warming is a real and it would be easier dealing with this problem starting on the schools. Furthermore, young people need to know that there are many problems in others countries that does not exist only on movies. The violence, poorness, hunger need to be fight. If all schools put the international news as subject, less problems might be seen in the future.
In contrast, some others may claim that is a waste of valuable school time and the students should learning more math, biology, history, geography etc. However, the simple subjects also depend of any international knowledge. Whether the teacher is talking about history of the art, many countries and happenings are involved. Therefore, studying international knowledge and the news is vital to make a good learning.
Having considered both views, I think that international news should be included as subjects because of several reasons that I mentioned as above.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, i think, in contrast, talking about
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1384.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2030075188 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77784699759 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.582706766917 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 411.3 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.4222751404 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.5 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.625 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.375 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.388687132261 0.244688304435 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115383925348 0.084324248473 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.115221049146 0.0667982634062 172% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.206388271619 0.151304729494 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.145919541375 0.056905535591 256% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.58 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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