Last month you had a holiday overseas where you stayed with some friends. They have just
sent you some photos of your holiday. Write a letter to your friends. In your letter: Thanks them for the photos and for holiday. Explain why you didn't write earlier invite them to come and stay with you
Dear Sara and Jack,
I hope you are doing well. I would like to thank you because you hosted me very well last month. I had a great time on your side. As you know it was the first time, I traveled to England and I would confess it was one of the best memorable trips which I have had overseas until now.
Last night I received the photos you sent me via telegram. They were fascinating particularly those we took near the sea. I desperately apologize that I respond you very late. As you know well, the internet connection is quite weak in Iran. Moreover, the authority has recently banned some social media including telegram. However, fortunately, I downloaded a software on the internet which allow me to join telegram. Therefore, I could write you.
I want to invite you joining me for Nouriz holiday in Iran. I am going to rent a villa in the south of Iran, Kish. The weather will be wonderful at that time. I think you can take ten days leave from your office to come to Iran.
I hope you can fix it and I see you soon.
Best wishes
Elham.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 151, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ar the sea. I desperately apologize that I respond you very late. As you know wel...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, moreover, so, therefore, well, i think, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 32.9175257732 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 859.0 937.175257732 92% => OK
No of words: 198.0 206.0 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.33838383838 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75116612262 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39091677227 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 127.690721649 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.646464646465 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 277.2 290.88556701 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6804123711 134% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 16.3608247423 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.2557036109 44.8134815571 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 50.5294117647 76.5299724578 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 11.6470588235 16.8248392259 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.76470588235 4.34317383033 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.34179517724 0.216113520407 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100755075984 0.0766984524023 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0784882134555 0.0603063233224 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.198979513793 0.12726935374 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0248034902232 0.0580467560999 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 4.8 8.37731958763 57% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.23 70.7449484536 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.71 8.71597938144 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.05 7.59969072165 93% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.4 8.54432989691 75% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 151, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ar the sea. I desperately apologize that I respond you very late. As you know wel...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, moreover, so, therefore, well, i think, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 32.9175257732 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 859.0 937.175257732 92% => OK
No of words: 198.0 206.0 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.33838383838 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75116612262 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39091677227 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 127.690721649 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.646464646465 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 277.2 290.88556701 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6804123711 134% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 16.3608247423 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.2557036109 44.8134815571 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 50.5294117647 76.5299724578 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 11.6470588235 16.8248392259 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.76470588235 4.34317383033 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.34179517724 0.216113520407 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100755075984 0.0766984524023 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0784882134555 0.0603063233224 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.198979513793 0.12726935374 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0248034902232 0.0580467560999 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 4.8 8.37731958763 57% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.23 70.7449484536 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.71 8.71597938144 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.05 7.59969072165 93% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.4 8.54432989691 75% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.