Last month you had an overseas holiday with some friends where you stayed at their house. They have just sent you some holiday photos. Write a letter to your friends. In your letter: thank them for the holiday and the photos. Explain why you didn’t write earlier. Invite them to come and stay with you. (use 150 words)
Dear Rahul, Emile, and Emma,
How are you guys? It’s been a while since we last interacted. Hope you all are doing great. I have learned that both Emile and Rahul joined Microsoft as Data scientists this month. I am glad that you both finally got a job at the company you love. And Emma, how is your new book coming on? I can’t wait to read it.
I have joined the private equity firm I was recruited by two months back. I was heavily loaded with work since last few weeks, hence could not find time to write to you guys. This morning, I woke up to find the courier Rahul sent. I am extremely glad to find the photographs of our trip. The trip was one of a kind and will go down in our memory as one of the best trips. I thank you guys for organizing the whole trip so eventfully.
On a different note, I want to plan a small party just for us at my home. You all must visit me soon and we can catch up with the events in our lives. Let us discuss the party in this thread and fix a date.
I look forward to hearing from you guys soon.
With lots of love,
Kevin Paul
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| 2019-04-09 | Mahender4iel | 73 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 74, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...irm I was recruited by two months back. I was heavily loaded with work since last...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, hence, if, look, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 869.0 937.175257732 93% => OK
No of words: 216.0 206.0 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.02314814815 4.54256449028 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.83365862548 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.04874057971 2.54303337028 81% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.634259259259 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 269.1 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.41237113402 85% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 12.6804123711 142% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 20.1332750796 44.8134815571 45% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 48.2777777778 76.5299724578 63% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.0 16.8248392259 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.94444444444 4.34317383033 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.94845360825 228% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232494926036 0.216113520407 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.066659230196 0.0766984524023 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0525596602332 0.0603063233224 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107881429047 0.12726935374 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0717583141865 0.0580467560999 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 3.5 8.37731958763 42% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 93.14 70.7449484536 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 3.3 7.45979381443 44% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 5.15 8.71597938144 59% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.28 7.59969072165 83% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 41.2886597938 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 8.62886597938 52% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 5.0 8.15463917526 61% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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