Last month you travelled to another city You told a friend who lives in the city that you would meet them but you did not Write a letter to this friend In your letter apologise for not meeting him her explain why you did not contact him her earlier sugges

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Last month, you travelled to another city. You told a friend who lives in the city that you would meet them, but you did not. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter

apologise for not meeting him/her
explain why you did not contact him/her earlier
suggest a time and place to meet in the future.

Hi there,

Hope you are doing well and will be in good health. I am writing this letter to present my apologies for not meeting you in my recent official visit to Paris. I request you to please don't consider this an excuse, I got really occupied with some high priority official work. My work entailed me to work 10-12 hours a day. Also, I hardly got some spare time for my self. I was overjoyed and excited for my this trip however, I had no idea that I won't be able to meet my dear friend for few minutes only. I got dejected but no one else is accountable for this mistake except myself.

Please consider this as my sincere apology. I am hopeful with the news that my manager is thinking to send me Paris again for some other work. I assume that this trip will take place after two months. Furthermore, I have already decided and planed our meeting this time whatever may the condition. I would suggest we should meet near Efile tower, I really want to experience its beauty. As well as, I will get some good chocolates for you from London. Looking forward to see you after couple of months, till then take care of yourself and family.

Regards,
John

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 184, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...visit to Paris. I request you to please dont consider this an excuse, I got really o...
^^^^
Line 5, column 469, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to seeing'.
Suggestion: to seeing
...es for you from London. Looking forward to see you after couple of months, till then t...
^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, look, may, really, so, then, well, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 32.9175257732 134% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 957.0 937.175257732 102% => OK
No of words: 216.0 206.0 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.43055555556 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.83365862548 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.23571808524 2.54303337028 88% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.634259259259 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 300.6 290.88556701 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.13402061856 153% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.7202430546 44.8134815571 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.3571428571 76.5299724578 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4285714286 16.8248392259 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.57142857143 4.34317383033 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.29896907216 47% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200677496284 0.216113520407 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0640979106134 0.0766984524023 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0573399903057 0.0603063233224 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163819176342 0.12726935374 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0231157908196 0.0580467560999 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.2 8.37731958763 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.12 8.71597938144 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.23 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 184, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...visit to Paris. I request you to please dont consider this an excuse, I got really o...
^^^^
Line 5, column 469, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to seeing'.
Suggestion: to seeing
...es for you from London. Looking forward to see you after couple of months, till then t...
^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, look, may, really, so, then, well, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 32.9175257732 134% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 957.0 937.175257732 102% => OK
No of words: 216.0 206.0 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.43055555556 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.83365862548 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.23571808524 2.54303337028 88% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.634259259259 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 300.6 290.88556701 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.13402061856 153% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.7202430546 44.8134815571 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.3571428571 76.5299724578 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4285714286 16.8248392259 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.57142857143 4.34317383033 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.29896907216 47% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200677496284 0.216113520407 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0640979106134 0.0766984524023 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0573399903057 0.0603063233224 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163819176342 0.12726935374 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0231157908196 0.0580467560999 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.2 8.37731958763 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.12 8.71597938144 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.23 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.