Last year you met someone on holiday and became friends. He/she has informed you that they will be travelling near to your home town on business in a few months' time.
Write a letter to your friend inviting them to stay with you. In your letter
say how pleased you are to hear from them
invite them to stay with you
tell them about your ideas of how you could spend the time together
Dear Annie,
Hope you are doing well by the grace of Almighty. I received your letter yesterday which stated that you'll be coming to visit my hometown New Delhi in India in a couple of few months.
Let me tell know how happy and pleased I was after hearing the news from your letter. I still remember the time where you have helped to find my lost passport during my last vacation to Maldives. You were like an angel sent by God to save from a disaster. The more I learned about you, the more attached I felt to you as a friend. And, after reading your letter, I was extremely happy to return the favors by inviting you to stay at my house during your business trip to my city.
The company in which you work is just ten minutes of walk from my home. Thus, it would be best for you to stay in my apartment because not only you'll be able to save your expenses of cost of living but also we both get more time to spend together at my place. Apart from this, I'll take you to dine out in different restaurants where you can try delicious North Indian Dishes along with couple of drinks. Plus, on weekends, we can visit beautiful temples and stunning views of the city.
I am looking forward to see you soon.
Best Regards,
Shwatank
Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 102, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: you'll
...your letter yesterday which stated that youll be coming to visit my hometown New Delh...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 42, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...et me tell know how happy and pleased I was after hearing the news from your letter. I still rem...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 145, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: you'll
...o stay in my apartment because not only youll be able to save your expenses of cost o...
^^^^^
Line 7, column 278, Rule ID: ILL_I_LL[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I'll'?
Suggestion: I'll
... together at my place. Apart from this, Ill take you to dine out in different resta...
^^^
Line 9, column 22, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to seeing'.
Suggestion: to seeing
...s of the city. I am looking forward to see you soon. Best Regards, Shwatank ...
^^^^^^
Line 9, column 39, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... I am looking forward to see you soon. Best Regards, Shwatank
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so, still, thus, well, apart from
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 26.3917525773 167% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1018.0 937.175257732 109% => OK
No of words: 235.0 206.0 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.33191489362 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91531732006 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.11800362112 2.54303337028 83% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 127.690721649 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.642553191489 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 310.5 290.88556701 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.8266608017 44.8134815571 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.3076923077 76.5299724578 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0769230769 16.8248392259 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.15384615385 4.34317383033 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.325324942624 0.216113520407 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105158727618 0.0766984524023 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0629190044994 0.0603063233224 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184372304569 0.12726935374 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0764806254076 0.0580467560999 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 8.37731958763 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 70.7449484536 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.54 8.71597938144 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.68 7.59969072165 88% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 102, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: you'll
...your letter yesterday which stated that youll be coming to visit my hometown New Delh...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 42, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...et me tell know how happy and pleased I was after hearing the news from your letter. I still rem...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 145, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: you'll
...o stay in my apartment because not only youll be able to save your expenses of cost o...
^^^^^
Line 7, column 278, Rule ID: ILL_I_LL[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I'll'?
Suggestion: I'll
... together at my place. Apart from this, Ill take you to dine out in different resta...
^^^
Line 9, column 22, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to seeing'.
Suggestion: to seeing
...s of the city. I am looking forward to see you soon. Best Regards, Shwatank ...
^^^^^^
Line 9, column 39, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... I am looking forward to see you soon. Best Regards, Shwatank
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so, still, thus, well, apart from
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 26.3917525773 167% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1018.0 937.175257732 109% => OK
No of words: 235.0 206.0 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.33191489362 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91531732006 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.11800362112 2.54303337028 83% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 127.690721649 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.642553191489 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 310.5 290.88556701 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.8266608017 44.8134815571 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.3076923077 76.5299724578 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0769230769 16.8248392259 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.15384615385 4.34317383033 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.325324942624 0.216113520407 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105158727618 0.0766984524023 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0629190044994 0.0603063233224 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184372304569 0.12726935374 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0764806254076 0.0580467560999 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 8.37731958763 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 70.7449484536 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.54 8.71597938144 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.68 7.59969072165 88% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.