Today our lifestyle is changing rapidly and this change affects our family relationships. How are the relationships getting affected? Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?
In today's world, relationships are affected due to the rapid changes in modern lifestyles for several reasons which will be discussed in the following essay along with the pros and cons.
Indubitably, the modern lifestyle has given multiple benefits to society because of its certain advancements. The first and foremost is development is in the technological area which has removed the communication barriers for loved ones by creating mobile phones. Due to phones, one family member can speak instantly to another member of the family even if, they both are far away from each other. That distance of communication barrier has been broken by the modern technology in telecommunication. Apart from this, with the birth of the internet, the world has become a single entity. Due to the internet, people can virtually connect through various tech medium applications such as Facebook, WhatsApp, and others. These social platforms have brought people closer to each other globally. Moreover, the means of transportation have been modified by creating automobile vehicles for commuting longer distances. This kind of traveling is not only effortless but also increases the bond of family members who are living far but using automobiles like cars and bikes, the long-distance traveling became a cakewalk for individuals.
Despite having numerous advantages there are some drawbacks of this vogue of modern lifestyle. Firstly, with this approach, mankind spends more time at work rather than with their loved ones. Plus, it also happens due to the competitive global market which could also state the effect of globalization. People spend traveling far for work rather than visiting their cousins or relatives due to busy schedule at work. This kind of current trend might have increased the longer gap among family members. Also, it has created a generation gap among juveniles who like to spend time on technological gadgets instead of spending time with their grandparents at home or with outdoor activities.
In conclusion, although there are few demerits with the ongoing trend of changes and effects in the current lifestyle of humankind, merits outweigh all negative aspects of this approach. There are many good results if used appropriately.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 233, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, so, apart from, in conclusion, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1908.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 354.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.38983050847 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33761313653 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88837629299 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 216.0 176.041082164 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.610169491525 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 592.2 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.997474675 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.0 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6666666667 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.88888888889 7.06120827912 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155688444364 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0435186135517 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0597501552108 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117264618624 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0655576208054 0.056905535591 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.98 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.49 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 78.4519038076 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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