Your child is going on a three-day school trip to another country. The head teacher wants to find parents to go with the group and you would like to go.
Write a letter to the head teacher. In your letter:
-say why you would like to go on the trip.
-suggest what you could do to help during the trip.
-ask details about the trip.
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing this letter to express my best interest to join the international school trip to India. My daughter is studying in ninth grade and will be going for this three day trip to Delhi. Although I do not wish to stress her with my presence, this would be an incredible experience for both of us.
Firstly, I am an Indian, and I have spent my almost thirty years in India. I have traveled exquisite destinations in India, and would be the best participant to guide children about the art, culture, and music in the capital city of India. Plus, I know about the city inch by inch along with food, beverages, street markets for shopping and accommodation. Therefore, you will not be required to arrange a tourist guide to assist. Secondly, India is rich in culture, there are certain restrictions in some places, and I will be to address them instantly. As some rules are expected to be followed without signs and information. Thus, you will not be liable for any consequences arising from not abiding the rules. Finally, I will be able to share any experiences with all children so that they all can enjoy and learn more than expected.
If you will concur my nomination from this letter, I would be keen to know if volunteers are required to pay the fee for the trip? Also, will the accommodation will be arranged by the school management?
I am looking forward to your immediate response.
Yours sincerely,
Shwatank Bhasin
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, firstly, if, look, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 7.48453608247 200% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 4.92783505155 244% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1208.0 937.175257732 129% => OK
No of words: 254.0 206.0 123% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75590551181 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 3.78020617076 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7380524089 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 127.690721649 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582677165354 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 369.9 290.88556701 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.463917525773 862% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.598544942 44.8134815571 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.5333333333 76.5299724578 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9333333333 16.8248392259 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.2 4.34317383033 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.94845360825 203% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.137044547647 0.216113520407 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0489341332979 0.0766984524023 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0478072679701 0.0603063233224 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0922617345346 0.12726935374 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0500117991815 0.0580467560999 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 8.37731958763 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.03 8.71597938144 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 41.2886597938 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.8426966292 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.75 Out of 9
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