Dear Rekha,
It was nice to hear from you but it was equally disheartening to know that you are facing the troubles that you described in your letter. I know how you must be feeling right now because I have myself experienced such hitches during the arly years in my job. In exactly the same fashion, I too was looked down upon and sometimes outright humiliated a my workplace just due to the fact that I had difficulty conversing in English.
Rekha, I can assure you that you can overcome these difficulties with the steadfastness of your character. You can try the things that I did while facing similar insults at my office. First of all, the golden rule that I employed was to never pay attention to any derogatory remarks or gestures hurled at me by my co-workers. It is essential that you brush-off such criticism completely with a smile and not let it become a burden on your head.
Secondly, I would urge you to join a local English speaking coaching centre and make progress in your Spoken English slowly but steadily. Trust me, the way to success is long but the success itself is permanent, as far as conversing in English in concerned.
Last but not the least, I implore you to not shy away from using your newly-acquired skills in Spoken English at your workplace. No matter if you using wrong words but remember this will be a great learning experience.
Hope to hear from you soon. Good luck.
Yours lovingly,
John.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 350, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'a' or 'my'?
Suggestion: a; my
... upon and sometimes outright humiliated a my workplace just due to the fact that I h...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, look, second, secondly, so, while, as to, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 49.0 32.9175257732 149% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 26.3917525773 125% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1195.0 937.175257732 128% => OK
No of words: 256.0 206.0 124% => OK
Chars per words: 4.66796875 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 3.78020617076 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6537643471 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 127.690721649 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.61328125 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 358.2 290.88556701 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.3683253582 44.8134815571 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.9230769231 76.5299724578 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6923076923 16.8248392259 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.38461538462 4.34317383033 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.255540400848 0.216113520407 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.089720892227 0.0766984524023 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0664774717864 0.0603063233224 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131091433298 0.12726935374 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0463541743577 0.0580467560999 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 8.37731958763 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 8.71597938144 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 41.2886597938 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 8.62886597938 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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