Letter to a friend recommending a restaurant for a family celebration In your letter you should tell where it is how you know it why you recommend this restaurant

Essay topics:

Letter to a friend recommending a restaurant for a family celebration.

In your letter, you should tell:
where it is
how you know it
why you recommend this restaurant.

Dear Ana,

Hope your are in radiant health and doing well in life. I has been really long time I have seen you.

I have received your letter yesterday that you got promoted. I am really happy for you and congratulates you on the achievement. You have also asked about the best family restaurant as you I will be providing the est suggestion as I am working in tourist industry.

In the heart of the London that is in central avenue, the famous family restaurant is located. As I am well aware you and your family member like Indian food so this Gujarati food outlet will be the best choice. It is running in the name of Jalaram foods.

I have visited this place last year with my mom and we really enjoyed the food. Moreover, the surrounding is extremely clean and it's famous for maintaining the quality. Environment is also peaceful and relaxing.

They are offering the best of dishes and all the customers are satisfied. You can check the reviews online. You can easily reach the place as traffic is also less in that area.

Hope you will like the place and have wonderful time with your loved ones.

Yours truly,
Maninder Kaur

Votes
Average: 8.5 (19 votes)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 59, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[1]
Message: The pronoun 'I' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'have'
Suggestion: have
...adiant health and doing well in life. I has been really long time I have seen you. ...
^^^
Line 5, column 62, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...letter yesterday that you got promoted. I am really happy for you and congratulat...
^
Line 9, column 125, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...over, the surrounding is extremely clean and its famous for maintaining the quali...
^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, really, so, well

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.48453608247 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 26.3917525773 61% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 954.0 937.175257732 102% => OK
No of words: 205.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.65365853659 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78388967377 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39017421501 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 127.690721649 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.560975609756 0.622605031667 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 296.1 290.88556701 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.3989436423 44.8134815571 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 59.625 76.5299724578 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.8125 16.8248392259 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.25 4.34317383033 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 7.41237113402 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.294019435075 0.216113520407 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0926786779143 0.0766984524023 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0790847767646 0.0603063233224 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143134355929 0.12726935374 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0911518430267 0.0580467560999 157% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.9 8.37731958763 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.22 70.7449484536 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.8 8.71597938144 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.62 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 64.606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.75 Out of 9
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