Nowadays shops have extended opening hours almost every day of the week in many countries. Is it a positive or negative development for shoppers and local community?
<span style="font-size: 19.36px;">These days in many part of the world the shops has been opened for longer hours, almost all around the week. Although it may have few adverse effects on the personnel life of the owner, but I assert that overall it will be beneficial for both owner and society.
To begin with, considering the advantages of long opening hours for the shop owners. The predominant benefit is increase in the profitability. If opening hours of any outlet will increase it will definitely add more income for the owner, because sale will boost. Due to increased working hours in almost all the arenas and profile of jobs, people usually get free in late hours, so they can easily purchase the things according to their convenient timings as they will find the shop open. apart from this, shoppers will also be compete with their rivals. In modern time there is perfect competition for all the products and commodities, so seller who will meet the demand in better way can only survive in this competitive world. Extended opening hours will definitely help to cater the customer need more efficiently.
Moving further, this increase in opening timings ha significant importance for the community growth. As seller profit will grow they will pay more tax to the government, which can be used by the local authorities for various community development activities. Government plan the budget for every financial year and allot expenditure to different areas according to the income received from different sources and tax is one of the major source of income. Another positive area is increase in the employee opportunities, more people will be recruited by the shoppers if they want to run for longer time. For example, employee are working in shifts, so many will be able to find the job and living standard will grow.
In conclusion, opening hours of the retail outlets are increasing in current years. Unequivocally it is helping the community to develop in many ways and leading the economy to grow. Owner are also earning more and able to overall the competition.</span><br>
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, apart from, for example, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 7.85571142285 229% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1764.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 347.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08357348703 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31600926901 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01970815 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553314121037 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 552.6 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.6767578478 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.764705882 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4117647059 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.52941176471 7.06120827912 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.257455772639 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0825719002242 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.052953474245 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15492038658 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0191375854406 0.056905535591 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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