LETTER OF INSTRUCTION YOU HAVE JUST SPENT A WEEK WITH A FREIND ON HOLIDAY WHEN YOU GOT HOME YOU REALISED YOU HAD LEFT YOUR WALLET THERE WRITE A LETTER TO YOUR FREIND IN YOUR LETTER THANK YOUR FREIND FOR THE HOLIDAY EXPLAIN THAT YOU LEFT YOUR WALLET IN THE

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LETTER OF INSTRUCTION
YOU HAVE JUST SPENT A WEEK WITH A FREIND ON HOLIDAY. WHEN YOU GOT HOME YOU REALISED YOU HAD LEFT YOUR WALLET THERE. WRITE A LETTER TO YOUR FREIND .IN YOUR LETTER :
• THANK YOUR FREIND FOR THE HOLIDAY
• EXPLAIN THAT YOU LEFT YOUR WALLET IN THEIR HOUSE
• GIVE THEM INSTRUCTIONS OF HOWTO SEND IT BACK TO YOU

HELLO
HOPE YOU ARE DOING GOOD. ITS BEEN GREAT TIME WITH YOU IN HOLIDAYS.I ENJOYED ALOT.I WISH WE WILL AGAIN SPENT SUCH WEEKEND HOLIDAYS TOGETHER.
ACTUALY AFTER RETURNED BACK FROM YOUR HOUSE I REALISED THAT I HAVE FORGET MY WALLET IN YOUR HOUSE.I HAVE MY DRIVING LICENCE , ADHAR CARD AND ATM CARD IN IT.I REALLY NEED IT BACK BECAUSE I CANT DRIVE TO OFFICE WITHOUT LICENCE.
I THINK IT IS LEFT IN THE DRAWER OF YOUR LEFT SIDE TABLE OF BED OR IT MAY BE ON THE LCD UNIT IN THE DINING ROOM.PLEASE CHECK AND INFORM ME IF IT IS THERE OR NOT.YOU CAN GET IT BACK THROUGH MY UNCLE. HE VISIT TO YOUR PLACE ON EVERY TUESDAY FOR HIS DOCTOR APPOINTMENT.TOMORROW IS TUESDAY AND I HAVE GAVE YOUR ADDRESS TO MY UNCLE . HE WILL HIMSELF COME TO YOUR PLACE. YOU PLEASE BE AVAILABLE IN YOUR HOME FOR TOMMOROW.
I WILL LOOK FORWARD FOR YOUR CALL.
HOPE WE WILL MEET SOON.
THANKS
YOURS

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 67, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
...TS BEEN GREAT TIME WITH YOU IN HOLIDAYS.I ENJOYED ALOT.I WISH WE WILL AGAIN SPENT...
^
Line 2, column 82, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
...IME WITH YOU IN HOLIDAYS.I ENJOYED ALOT.I WISH WE WILL AGAIN SPENT SUCH WEEKEND H...
^
Line 2, column 103, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'WILL' requires the base form of the verb: 'spend'
Suggestion: Spend
...AYS.I ENJOYED ALOT.I WISH WE WILL AGAIN SPENT SUCH WEEKEND HOLIDAYS TOGETHER. ACTUAL...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 15, Rule ID: RETURN_BACK[1]
Message: Use simply 'RETURNED'.
Suggestion: RETURNED
...EKEND HOLIDAYS TOGETHER. ACTUALY AFTER RETURNED BACK FROM YOUR HOUSE I REALISED THAT I HAVE ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 68, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'forgotten'.
Suggestion: Forgotten
... FROM YOUR HOUSE I REALISED THAT I HAVE FORGET MY WALLET IN YOUR HOUSE.I HAVE MY DRIVI...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 98, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
...T I HAVE FORGET MY WALLET IN YOUR HOUSE.I HAVE MY DRIVING LICENCE , ADHAR CARD AN...
^
Line 3, column 123, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... IN YOUR HOUSE.I HAVE MY DRIVING LICENCE , ADHAR CARD AND ATM CARD IN IT.I REALLY ...
^^
Line 3, column 156, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
...LICENCE , ADHAR CARD AND ATM CARD IN IT.I REALLY NEED IT BACK BECAUSE I CANT DRIV...
^
Line 3, column 158, Rule ID: PRP_RB_NO_VB[1]
Message: Are you missing a verb?
...CENCE , ADHAR CARD AND ATM CARD IN IT.I REALLY NEED IT BACK BECAUSE I CANT DRIVE TO OFFICE ...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 188, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: Can't; Cannot
...D IN IT.I REALLY NEED IT BACK BECAUSE I CANT DRIVE TO OFFICE WITHOUT LICENCE. I THI...
^^^^
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... CANT DRIVE TO OFFICE WITHOUT LICENCE. I THINK IT IS LEFT IN THE DRAWER OF YOUR ...
^
Line 4, column 202, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'HE' must be used with a third-person verb: 'visits'.
Suggestion: Visits
...OU CAN GET IT BACK THROUGH MY UNCLE. HE VISIT TO YOUR PLACE ON EVERY TUESDAY FOR HIS ...
^^^^^
Line 4, column 297, Rule ID: GAVE_GIVE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'give'?
Suggestion: Give
...OINTMENT.TOMORROW IS TUESDAY AND I HAVE GAVE YOUR ADDRESS TO MY UNCLE . HE WILL HIMS...
^^^^
Line 4, column 297, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'given'.
Suggestion: Given
...OINTMENT.TOMORROW IS TUESDAY AND I HAVE GAVE YOUR ADDRESS TO MY UNCLE . HE WILL HIMS...
^^^^
Line 4, column 326, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...AND I HAVE GAVE YOUR ADDRESS TO MY UNCLE . HE WILL HIMSELF COME TO YOUR PLACE. YOU...
^^
Line 8, column 6, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... HOPE WE WILL MEET SOON. THANKS YOURS
^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, may, really, so, i think

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 32.9175257732 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 713.0 937.175257732 76% => OK
No of words: 163.0 206.0 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.37423312883 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57311423478 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35819108586 2.54303337028 93% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 127.690721649 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.680981595092 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 219.6 290.88556701 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 73.0859767671 44.8134815571 163% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.2222222222 76.5299724578 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1111111111 16.8248392259 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.77777777778 4.34317383033 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 2.54639175258 628% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.374344283362 0.216113520407 173% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.161875859527 0.0766984524023 211% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0887583933687 0.0603063233224 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152968140195 0.12726935374 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0969216277775 0.0580467560999 167% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 8.37731958763 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 70.7449484536 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.77 8.71597938144 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 7.59969072165 114% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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