YOU ARE APPLYING FOR A JOB AND NEED A LETTER OF REFERENCE WRITE A LETTER TO A FORMER TEACHER IN YOUR LETTER GIVE DETAILS OF THE JOB EXPLAIN WHY IT IS IMPORTANT TO YOU SUGGEST WHAT INFORMATION YOUR TEACHER COULD PUT IN THE REFERENCE

Essay topics:

YOU ARE APPLYING FOR A JOB AND NEED A LETTER OF REFERENCE
WRITE A LETTER TO A FORMER TEACHER IN YOUR LETTER:
• GIVE DETAILS OF THE JOB
• EXPLAIN WHY IT IS IMPORTANT TO YOU
• SUGGEST WHAT INFORMATION YOUR TEACHER COULD PUT IN THE REFERENCE

HELLO MANMOHIT SIR,
I AM ANCHAL ONE OF YOUR STUDENTS OF 2018 BATCH PASSOUT IN YOUR COLLEGE.HOPE YOU ARE DOING GOOD. I AM WRITING TO YOU FOR A REFERENCE LETTER WHICH I NEED FROM YOU TO FILL AN APPLICATION FORM FOR THE POST OF JUNIOR ARCHITECT IN PUNJAB URBAN DEVELOPMENT AUTHORITY AS AN ASSISTANT ARCHITECT.
LAST SATURDAY I CAME TO KNOW ABOUT THIS POST THROUGH NEWSPAPER.LAST DATE TO FILL THE FORM IS 30-08-2020. AS YOU KNOW IN OUR FEILD WE HARDLY GOT ANY VACANCY IN GOVT. DEPARTMENT. AND THIS POST IS CAME AFTER THREE YEARS AND I WORK REALLY HARD FOR THE GOVT. JOB AND FINALLY THIS YEAR PUDA HAS RELEASED A VACANCY NOTICE. I DO NOT WANT TO LET IT GO DUE TO ANY OF MY MISTAKE THATS WHY I NEED YOUR GUIDEDANCE REGARD MY APPLICATION LETTER.
IN THE APPLICATION FORM THEY ASKED TO ATTACH THE SELF ATTESTED BACHEOLER DEGREE OF OURS. BUT WE DON’T HAVE ISSUED DEGREE YET. BUT I HAVE MY PROVISIONAL DEGREE , IS IT OK IF I ATTACHED THIS PROVISIONAL ONE TO THE FORM. SECONDLY , I WANT SOME REFERENCE THAT HOW SHOULD I INTRODUCE MY SELF IN CV. IS IT NECESSARY TO GIVE PERSONAL INFORMATION LIKE PARENT’S NAME, WHAT ARE THEY DOING OR TO GIVE PROFESSIONAL DETAIL IS SUFFICIENT.
I LOOK FOREWARD TO HEARING FROM YOU.
YOUR SINCERELY,
ANCHAL

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Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 105, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “AS” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ST DATE TO FILL THE FORM IS 30-08-2020. AS YOU KNOW IN OUR FEILD WE HARDLY GOT ANY...
^^
Line 3, column 194, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'come'.
Suggestion: Come
...Y IN GOVT. DEPARTMENT. AND THIS POST IS CAME AFTER THREE YEARS AND I WORK REALLY HAR...
^^^^
Line 3, column 368, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: THAT'S
...T TO LET IT GO DUE TO ANY OF MY MISTAKE THATS WHY I NEED YOUR GUIDEDANCE REGARD MY AP...
^^^^^
Line 4, column 158, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...EE YET. BUT I HAVE MY PROVISIONAL DEGREE , IS IT OK IF I ATTACHED THIS PROVISIONAL...
^^
Line 4, column 226, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...IS PROVISIONAL ONE TO THE FORM. SECONDLY , I WANT SOME REFERENCE THAT HOW SHOULD I...
^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, if, look, really, second, secondly, so, you know

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 32.9175257732 118% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1016.0 937.175257732 108% => OK
No of words: 223.0 206.0 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.55605381166 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86434787811 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75177518462 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 127.690721649 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.600896860987 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 316.8 290.88556701 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.5247227012 44.8134815571 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.5714285714 76.5299724578 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9285714286 16.8248392259 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.42857142857 4.34317383033 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.242510090776 0.216113520407 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0672150219258 0.0766984524023 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0620846278819 0.0603063233224 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127804855151 0.12726935374 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0751353191362 0.0580467560999 129% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 8.37731958763 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.87 8.71597938144 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 41.2886597938 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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